First human (just look)

Kat · **Posted:** October 16th, 2007, 7:30 pm

I think its meh first human I drew....

Maybe.

Just look.

Didn't take long to make, just another something random.

But this time I got the shading right on the shirt (white)

:O

C&C Wanted

Adbot · **Posted:** October 16th, 2007, 7:30 pm

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** October 16th, 2007, 10:21 pm

It's actually pretty good. I think that if you could make the mouth more..natural, it'd be good. Right now, it sort of looks like he has toothpaste foam in his mouth :oops:

Kat · **Posted:** October 16th, 2007, 11:35 pm

Mushroom Queen wrote:

It's actually pretty good. I think that if you could make the mouth more..natural, it'd be good. Right now, it sort of looks like he has toothpaste foam in his mouth :oops:

xD

I always never was good at drawing faces..

Thanks a ton.

I've seen your art, your amazing.

I'll try better next time

99887 · **Posted:** October 16th, 2007, 11:45 pm

It's quite good if you build up the nose (with shading) and add lips It would be great.

Kat · **Posted:** October 17th, 2007, 9:08 am

Your idea is great!

Will anyone please give me the same for this:

I'm in a drawy mood

Cannot stop drawing stuff! :O

Anubis · **Posted:** October 17th, 2007, 9:28 am

I think you should start to shade your objects with a light source in mind, and not just 'randomly'. You've gotten the hang of gradients/pattern effects but now you've got to more out of experimentation and into realism if you want to improve.

Try to use finer details with smaller brushes, downlaod new brushes (and patterns) to give your pieces a little more variety, you'll find your work improves significantly if you upgrade your tools.

Adbot · **Posted:** October 17th, 2007, 9:28 am

Kat · **Posted:** October 17th, 2007, 9:33 am

Anubis wrote:

I think you should start to shade your objects with a light source in mind, and not just 'randomly'. You've gotten the hang of gradients/pattern effects but now you've got to more out of experimentation and into realism if you want to improve.

Try to use finer details with smaller brushes, downlaod new brushes (and patterns) to give your pieces a little more variety, you'll find your work improves significantly if you upgrade your tools.

Great great review!

Now I know exactly what to do on my next one, which is important, because I plan to possibly use it for the mascot of my site (or at least a pet on vKitty)