Funny Poem

ToTheMax · **Posted:** June 20th, 2007, 5:02 pm

Rate this poem out of 10. Such as 10/10. Thanks, and I hope you like it!

There once was a girl named rose

You can often find her picking her nose

She would pick and pick

And lick and lick

Would she ever stop who knows?

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Adbot · **Posted:** June 20th, 2007, 5:02 pm

Ranging God · **Posted:** June 20th, 2007, 6:53 pm

heh, immature poems make me laugh

6/10 it could be longer, and more detailed! lol

MattVortex · **Posted:** June 21st, 2007, 8:23 am

It's not written right. A limerick is supposed to be written with a syllabic rhythm pattern of 7-7-5-5-7 and a rhyming pattern of A-A-B-B-A. You have the rhyming pattern, but your rhythm is 7-10-5-4-7. Also, the last line is a bit vulgar with its rhythm.

A good attempt, though.