Characters WIP

Southrend · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 2:57 am

Yup a Work In Progress.

I'm trying to make a mage and I came up with this so far. I'm open for critics.

You can also discuss my older attempts at other characters in this topic.

The Mage:

Me:
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/5166/headswateredfh2.png

I'm incredibly sorry for the bad waterproof mark. Best I could do in paint :roll:

I'm also sorry for the white background but it's a pretty dark character and black doesn't work that good. Maybe I should make it a blue mage.

Older characters:

To view them visit this topic

Adbot · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 2:57 am

Burnt Joint · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 3:17 am

I will give that an 8/10. Something that would look cool is if he had an orb on his staff. It would be even cooler if his robes were longer. The skirt is good, but if you make it so we can only see the tip of his feet, then in my opinion, that would look awesome. And one last thing.... If you bring his left arm out, to look like he has just done a spell, so basically his palm flat towards us, and maybe a slight green glow and some smoke from it .

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Other than those few things, keep up the great work

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Anubis · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 4:08 am

Are you using cloth dynamics for the clothing or are you modeling them manually?

I think you should try making the skirt droop a little more than it is, and instead of black use the dark brown/green dark mages use on rs.

Anyways, I like it. It doesn't look plastic but silky, which is good.

Southrend · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 4:50 am

A small update.

Got rid of the black colors and got a black background

Sebastian · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 6:44 am

Looks great so far, only thing missing is some green glow from his left hand

James · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 11:25 am

i like the second one better more detial. I like how you did the lava staff.

Adbot · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 11:25 am

Brandt · **Posted:** June 19th, 2007, 3:07 pm

The left arm to me seems to be in a spot that isnt capable for the human body, mainly with the forearm and palm. elsewise, maybe add a more woddy texture to the staff and make the robe flow more evenly together. Except that, it looks pretty great

Sidespin · **Posted:** June 22nd, 2007, 6:27 pm

I like the second one alot better, staff and color looks alot better. Mabye fix the clothes so they look a little more together, but you get a 8/10 because it's pritty cool overall!

Topdog · **Posted:** June 25th, 2007, 7:53 am

The second one looks fantastic and I would also have to say it's good because you included a watermark. Nice job =D>

Southrend · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 7:55 am

This is me ingame:

This is partially me in 3D:

Any need for improvement?

Kyle · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 8:16 am

Woo shiny face, but that looks really really good. You should submit them to Jagex for the players gallery...

Southrend · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 8:22 am

Kyle wrote:

Woo shiny face, but that looks really really good. You should submit them to Jagex for the players gallery...

Once it's finished

And i'll fix that shiny part on his face.