Jak and Daxter, latest

Stormz · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 3:46 pm

not very good, but here it is:

Adbot · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 3:46 pm

Ranging God · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 4:40 pm

I dont like all teh red, add some green and black, but over all pretty good!

Brandt · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 4:47 pm

Well, I agree, but I will tell you why on a graphics point of view. Without some sort of contrasting colors, it appears lifeless, and very stale. So, try to put in some sort of blue, green, or purple, that will add lots of life to your graphic.

Rapidash · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 4:52 pm

Meh..it's okay I guess but you can do better

Stormz · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 4:58 pm

yea, thanks for the feedback, ill work on putting more "Life" into my sigs, thanks

Brandt · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 6:16 pm

no problem, I have problems with livlieness in my fractals, the best you can do is just try different combos and look for a "WOW" reaction from yourself.

Adbot · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 6:16 pm

Daniel · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 11:42 pm

try to match the background with the render, maybe duplicate the render and motion blur it, then set it to overlay

overall i'll give a 6/10

Litis · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 7:32 am

I like the way how the text is placed, the rest is pretty bad

Try to blend your render next time and make it match the signature using hue.

Mr Pink · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 7:44 am

I agree with Ranging God, the whole picture is covered with mix of red and pink. If you would change the color it would be much better.

Chris · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 9:35 am

I think the background is okay, but the render does not blend with it at all. Try to have the render blend in with the background, so in this case, make the whole thing a shade of red. Green and red don't mix =p

Stormz · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 3:25 pm

Great! will try all these new styles! thanks again for all of the feedback

rikusora321 · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 4:25 pm

Ranging God wrote:

I dont like all teh red, add some green and black, but over all pretty good!

i agree

Jeff · **Posted:** April 18th, 2006, 9:12 am

rikusora321 wrote:

Ranging God wrote:

I dont like all teh red, add some green and black, but over all pretty good!

i agree

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