Cartoon .. Dbz referred to my rsn .. Please rate?

Flipvlug · **Posted:** March 5th, 2006, 2:16 pm

my rsn is gohan70713 btw..

The sig is currently in my signature
*worked 3 hours and 30 mins on it total

Heres the full version , *well.. the FULL FULL version was 2048 x 1538 but i resized it to 1024 x 768*

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c21/flipvlug/true.jpg

If people could rate or comment on it it would be great (y)

*btw im thinking on letting the aura animate.. what u reckon? (h)

Adbot · **Posted:** March 5th, 2006, 2:16 pm

Flipvlug · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 8:29 am

no response

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czskrazzi · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 9:57 am

Flipvlug wrote:

no response

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ever read the forum rules? i know most people dont but please dont double post.

on topic i dont really like it,

i dunno, i hate everything to do with dbz, its worse than pokemom, just my opinion.

Sarion · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 10:40 am

Besides the fact that is has to do with DBZ I dont rly like it. Its too bright for one thing. Theres other things but I just cant put my finger on it.

Litis · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 12:07 pm

Okay, it's really bright... so I don't see clearly what's there... and, uh, I don't really get the point of it, though it's done okay... and why the hell did you double post? I didn't expect that from you

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 12:29 pm

Agh, everyone in this forum thinks that things are either "too bright" or "too dark." I think you did a great job on the arms and hair. Whether it's DBZ or not doesn't matter. You did a good job in making it.

Adbot · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 12:29 pm

CreepyPirate · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 12:48 pm

It's supposed to be bright, if you've ever seen that show he goes all super duper.

Can't judge it on the show, judge it on the graphical goodness.

Flipvlug · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 1:14 pm

i just wanted to try out this style...

murdererdood · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 2:47 pm

creepybacon wrote:

It's supposed to be bright, if you've ever seen that show he goes all super duper.

Can't judge it on the show, judge it on the graphical goodness.

Evil guy:RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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*takes breath*

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa
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I AM NOW STRONGER THAN YOU AND CAN DEFEAT YOU BECAUSE I AM
STRONGER THAN YOU, FEAR MY POWER.

That bald ***: O noes, we're all gonna die :O

little annoynig kid of goku : i'll try and defeat uou but end up dying and making my dad even stronger RAAARRGHH

That green one: Humph.

That goku ***:I WILL DEFEAT YOU AND SAVE EARTH BECAUSE really im just a nice guy

and omg you killed my family :O
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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NOW WE ARE ALL UBERSUPERMECHASTRONGERTHANYOUARELONGERHAIREDANDYELLOW
SUPER SAIYANS RAAAARGH

Bad guy: O M F G NOOOOO

Goku ***: Hey guys now where done want a bbq?

That's pretty much dbz in a nutshell. Canny good graphic btw.

Chris · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 4:15 pm

Murderhood, do I hear spam? Don't go off topic please, he wants it rated, so don't spam it.

Tjbartz2009 · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 4:37 pm

Alrite...I used to watch DBZ back in the day

1. They never had weapons only their fists and other super powers.
2. It is even a little to bright for DBZ

Otherwise VERY GOOD

Take notice to the pic

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 9:55 pm

Making fanart is different. The weapons on the arms, sure, maybe they didn't have that. But in terms of brightness or style, give the guy freedom to take on a different approach to drawing it. If he made a carbon copy of an original DBZ scene, I'd honestly be disappointed.

Cold Fussion · **Posted:** March 6th, 2006, 11:09 pm

czskrazzi wrote:

Flipvlug wrote:

no response

?

ever read the forum rules? i know most people dont but please dont double post.

on topic i dont really like it,

i dunno, i hate everything to do with dbz, its worse than pokemom, just my opinion.

not a fair way to critque are because you don't like the show it's based off. I like it, but the anatomy (sp?) needs some work. which program is it made in?

Anubis · **Posted:** March 7th, 2006, 3:37 am

looks to be a vector, so most prolly Illustrator

Flipvlug · **Posted:** March 7th, 2006, 4:02 am

i made it in photoshop CS :oops:

im gonna try and make another one, only a bit.. darker

and with.. better eyes, mouth etc.

just.. trying to make it.. look more detailed too

and mayb a glowing\moving aura?
btw thnx for the pic of the gohan aura i might gonna work with that...
Thanks for your comments so far people