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Post subject: Register and login to get these in-post ads to disappear Posted: October 18th, 2009, 4:36 am |
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Post subject: Re: A few schooly things Posted: October 19th, 2009, 9:26 am |
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Joined: May 27th, 2006, 6:26 am Posts: 2159 Location: Photoshop
RS Name: Humus_75
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For the first, I really like the pop out effect on each strip, but the text and the white bar diverts the eye from the main focal points. Aside from that, it's great. I love all the different types of media you've incorporated.
The second I like also, but I'm kind of thinking it would look better with some more colours. I don;t know, it might ruin it. "Taniwa2 looks a bit cut off, and it's a little difficult to read the N but other than that it's perfect.
The third is interesting; you've done it all really well but it just doesn't look like it's there, if you know what I mean. It would look tons better if you sharpened the whole thing a bit, too. Real good stuff!
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