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Humus · **Posted:** June 11th, 2009, 12:30 pm

I had so much fun with this.

I think because the stock was such a good shot and really good quality too. Just some more fun with experimenting.

Adbot · **Posted:** June 11th, 2009, 12:30 pm

Al3X · **Posted:** June 11th, 2009, 3:35 pm

Was really confusing to look at until I looked at the stock. Looks like you spliced it quite a bit. It's overall pretty good but I don't like it for my personal taste.

Try altering it a little more. Maybe adjust the hue/saturation a bit.

Humus · **Posted:** June 13th, 2009, 3:20 am

Al3X wrote:

Was really confusing to look at until I looked at the stock. Looks like you spliced it quite a bit. It's overall pretty good but I don't like it for my personal taste.

Try altering it a little more. Maybe adjust the hue/saturation a bit.

Thanks.

I'll try what you said.

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** June 13th, 2009, 4:12 pm

Excellent. But um >.< don't put white text next to light objects (ie the girl's clothes). Either move it to one of the blue spots or change the text colour altogether. Good work though.

Steven · **Posted:** June 19th, 2009, 8:01 pm

It's amazing, to be honest.

just a couple of things though, for starters your text is too bright, and it's a little unreadable. My suggestion is to change the color and to change the text.

Otherwise, it's perfect.