Crisis Core Signature - Aeris/Aerith

Kirby · **Posted:** May 19th, 2008, 3:21 pm

Hello all. Been a while since I have posted here. Summer is near and almost here, so to make the message clear, I didn't add too much effects to it. What do you think?
EDIT: V2
EDIT: V3

Adbot · **Posted:** May 19th, 2008, 3:21 pm

Sev · **Posted:** May 19th, 2008, 6:25 pm

WAY to broing and WAY to simple. Stock, slap on some renders done.

Your renders don't fit your theme. I hardly see anything reminding me of summer, even the stock doesn't remind of summer. Your text is also very boring, if this sig is to ment to look like summer then it should have some brighter colors and shine more, as the whole sig should shine more.

3/10

You honestly could've done far more with this.

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** May 22nd, 2008, 4:02 pm

On the contrary, I don't think it's all that bad at all. I don't see a problem with the render/background not fitting the "theme", but I do see a few things that I'd suggest need work. I don't really like the fact that you duplicated the same render, but just flipped it horizontally. If you can get ahold of another render of the same character and use that instead, it'd be a lot better. The duplicate renders just make it look repetitive. That, and just make the text pop out a little bit more and it'll look fine. Nice job.

Sev · **Posted:** May 22nd, 2008, 7:54 pm

It's a new one... thats why it looks different

Edit: Post the old one so we can compare.

Anyways, the new ones looks MUCH better the improvement is great. The background is much, much better and you added some wavy effects which look nice. As MQ said though, the duplicate render isn't to good, expecially only when you changed the color... do what MQ said with the render, find a new and better one.

Marking22 · **Posted:** May 22nd, 2008, 8:13 pm

man its realy good

Kirby · **Posted:** May 23rd, 2008, 5:43 am

Okay thanks. I'll work on that. Renders of Aerith are hard to come by. In fact, there is only one render of her; which I'm already using, from Planetrenders. So I'll attempt to cut out a render myself.

Adbot · **Posted:** May 23rd, 2008, 5:43 am

Flipvlug · **Posted:** May 23rd, 2008, 3:11 pm

In my opinion.. you should get rid of the symmtrical copy image of Aerith on the RIGHT part of the signature.. I think that's the worst thing bothering me... since besides that you got a fairly nice signature.
I love the great strong summer colours in here, they are really fresh!

One thing I'd also work on is the brushing flowing over Aerith, you should remove that or erase the parts directly over her face.

Good job at making this mate

, If you're making a V2 I can't wait to see

Sev · **Posted:** May 23rd, 2008, 4:01 pm

Flipvlug wrote:

Good job at making this mate

, If you're making a V2 I can't wait to see

That is the V2

Flipvlug · **Posted:** May 23rd, 2008, 4:51 pm

Sev wrote:

Flipvlug wrote:

Good job at making this mate

, If you're making a V2 I can't wait to see

That is the V2

Oh, then I must be either really rude or just a bit confused. I'll change my comment to;

"Good job at making this mate

, If you're making an update I can't wait to see

"

Shucks sorry for that xD

fishunter · **Posted:** May 24th, 2008, 5:32 am

Kirby · **Posted:** May 24th, 2008, 6:20 am

Okay, I've edited it and added a new render. Took quite some cutting to do this and hid the stuff that didn't look that great.

I did take some of the comments into account such as take some off the mist of winter since summer is nearer than I thought. :shock:

Also the render of her on the right took a while to do to get the colours exactly correct. No mixing in with the skin. :wink:

V3