Interesting use of the dissolve effect. It makes the render blend in really nicely - can't say it's smooth since let's face it, it's dissolving.
Text is quite original too, it's unfortunate that you have an underscore in your name.
I would try making the underscore a different font to make it fit more with the rest of it, or just change it into a space or remove it altogether if you're not too worried about that.
Edit:
Dr Doom wrote:
I would try to eliminate some of the dissolve/grain effect from the face of the render if possible. Other than that, it's fine. Great job.
Oh yeah, I meant to add that in somewhere too.
