Another spectacle..

Crysala · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 1:28 am

Well this is kind of still a work in progress as my instructors tell me its not quite "finished" yet. I decided to post it anyway to get some other opinions. Thanks Priss for the render too.

Any C&C is appreciated..

Adbot · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 1:28 am

Mika91 · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 6:23 am

Im still like the n00by at sig slang.. so.. C&C.. something with comment? well, i like the sig but yea .. like you.. still i think sumthing is missing,.. dunno what

EnglishPenguin · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 7:54 am

I like that sig a lot, but the render looks a little out of place to me, but that might just be me, but it's really nice anyway,

Jiffy · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 7:56 am

Yeha in my opinion the render looks out of place and the two texts dont look good with eachother. Also try blending your render :wink:

. Also it kinda looks like you gaussian blurred the text that says Crysala. But I still like it so 7.5 outta 10

DaHool_02 · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 9:56 am

Looks good in general, have some tips though:
- blend the render more into the bg (just a little bit, not too much). The way I usually use to make this work is make a copy of the render, make it 30-40 motion blur, and set it to overlay/soft light depending on the general brightness of the sig. You might also want to make a few of these render copies and drag them alle around the sig (gives great color blending of render with background)
- Try not to emboss the text of your name that much, instead put it behind the color adjust ment layer and use inner shadow on anywhere from 15-50%
- Try to make the border 1 pix only (but that's just my personal liking

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Things I like alot:
- Nice render

- Good depth in background
- Good text placing
- I like the abstractness of the bg in general

- Also, nice use of color adjustment (but maybe a little bit less white in bg, don't know for sure)
7/10

Crysala · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 10:07 am

Dahool..surprisingly Ive done most of that lol. Regading the render and the blending and duplicating and stuff..I did all of it. Didnt seem to have much of an effect however. I got a friend to help me and he gave me all those tips..nothing seemed to change the way it looks tho, I think theres something I did lol. Thanks for the rates and suggestions all.

Adbot · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 10:07 am

DaHool_02 · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 11:28 am

well i have sometimes too that i try to change something to make it look better, but it doesnt work. i call that "shot" happens :wink:

Volte · **Posted:** November 28th, 2005, 3:55 pm

I really like the text and the rest of it isn't that bad. The render looks a bit funky but other than that I like it

Kronic · **Posted:** November 29th, 2005, 2:49 pm

nice work

only thing is possibly blend in your render some more