4th Attempt

Wham94 · **Posted:** September 23rd, 2008, 2:06 pm

Right, here's the 4th attempt. If it isn't good, I am not doing another. Moving onto a new sig. lol.

Constructive criticism appreciated.

Adbot · **Posted:** September 23rd, 2008, 2:06 pm

Unbirthday · **Posted:** September 23rd, 2008, 2:58 pm

Better than the last one for sure, but it isn't good. [imo]
It's good. I just don't like the lime green border. =/

crwire · **Posted:** September 23rd, 2008, 5:05 pm

Try it without the border, make it a little more towards the edge or try out more colours. Also could Kirby be a bit "sharper" its a little fuzzy. Other than that nice job! =D>

Marking22 · **Posted:** September 23rd, 2008, 5:47 pm

i like it but maybe a diffrent border or put something in the border

Jamie · **Posted:** September 23rd, 2008, 7:24 pm

As people before me said, the green border looks too out of place. Usually you can just do a stroke around the border if you use Photoshop - that will suffice well enough for a border. Otherwise, choose a better fitting color (a red or a pink possibly) and make it closer to the edge. Your text is still too bold and attracts more attention than the actual sig. There are some brushes on top of the Kirby layer that you should erase. Kirby itself still needs some sort of effect to catch the eye more. Making Kirby itself brighter and its surroundings darker would help.

Wham94 · **Posted:** September 24th, 2008, 9:05 am

so i'll change the border colour to red/pink and move it outward more, make the font smaller and kirby more sharper. I'm gonna give it another shot cause it doesn't need major changed this time.

Adbot · **Posted:** September 24th, 2008, 9:05 am

Steven · **Posted:** September 24th, 2008, 9:16 am

Move the border all the way to 1-2 pixels from going ouitside the signature, or just make a 1 pixel border around the image.

The text is too big, and it's too bold. The text's color doesn't blend at all, if you change the text to perhaps a purple or a red, it'd be fine.

Kirby is too dull, try to make something around or on him to make it catch people's eye.

Overall, it's better than your past 3. :roll: