Black Ribbon

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 2:43 am

I'm going to classify this as not being fully complete. The hair needs to a little fixed and I am wanting to make a background. Comments, please?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31902191/

Adbot · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 2:43 am

Anubis · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 3:19 am

As it was said on dA, the face is flawless, the eyes are beautiful, but I get the feeling of lifeless-ness when looking at them. The hair looks to be too far up the woman's head, and could have been brought forward a tad.

You seem to be creating a different style of photo manip recently, other than the dark, horror themed ones you used to make. I look forward to seeing your next peice.

CreepyPirate · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 4:22 am

I love her eyes.

Brandt · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 8:41 am

Very nice, but as said above, it does have this sense of lifelessness, but it is still very nice. What program do you use?

Creepy....dont fall in love with a picture..Id laugh...

Ranging God · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 12:35 pm

Ok, the face is good and the ribbon, but i don tlike how high the hair goes... Also you shoukld add a tear going down here face.

kingofrogue0 · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 3:48 pm

Yeah, the eyes look almost glazed over. It's pretty good, though. Why did you try a jester hat, exactly?

Adbot · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 3:48 pm

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** April 16th, 2006, 6:37 pm

kingofrogue0 wrote:

Yeah, the eyes look almost glazed over. It's pretty good, though. Why did you try a jester hat, exactly?

Originally, I wanted to make her sort of look like one of those jester porcelain dolls.

The hair is a little high set, I'll try to lower that.

Thanks for your comments, everyone

edit: I fixed the hair also.

Anubis · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 3:53 am

I still think the hair looks a bit odd :\ the fringe has no volume and looks flat on her head. Where as the rest looks BIG. Looks better than it did though.

Litis · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 7:25 am

The eyes are deep, in a great color, I don't know why everyone picks on the eyes. I think that what is wrong is her pale skin and the totally not matching red hair.

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 1:42 pm

Well, I somewhat was wanting to make her look like a manneqiun/doll so that would explain the sharp contrast of pale skin and dark hair. The hair was REALLY hard to do. Making hair look believable isn't one of the easier things to do. I like that she has a lot of hair.

Tjbartz2009 · **Posted:** April 17th, 2006, 5:40 pm

How do you have the patience to do something like that :shock:

I would probly go crazy even doing one eye because of the detail needed :twisted:

Its really good I like it I cant really comment anything bad because I dont know how good/bad its supposed to be :lol:

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** April 18th, 2006, 1:02 am

Aw, thanks, Tjbartz. I usually just get addicted to what I'm doing and I can't stop...

Art is evil :twisted:

Brandt · **Posted:** April 18th, 2006, 6:19 am

May i ask, what program do you use??

Litis · **Posted:** April 18th, 2006, 9:10 am

Her DeviantART profile -

Quote:

Tools of the Trade: Adobe CS and..and fingernail clippers =\

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** April 18th, 2006, 8:40 pm

de4thm4ge411 wrote:

May i ask, what program do you use??

I use Adobe Photoshop CS (not gonna get CS2..)

XD I need fingernail clippers. My fingernails make things cumbersome when I'm working.