Post new topic This topic is locked, you cannot edit posts or make further replies.  [ 10 posts ] 
Author Message
 Post subject: Car Sig
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 3:31 pm 
Adamantite Member
Offline

Joined: October 2nd, 2005, 12:00 pm
Posts: 161
RS Name: Oh Four
RS Status: Classic
Quote:
Image


Original Car:
Image

C/C please.

_________________
Image


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Register and login to get these in-post ads to disappear
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 3:31 pm 
Adamantite Member

Joined: September 9th, 2004, 1:47am
Posts: 9047
Location: In your web browserz


Top
  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 4:08 pm 
Rsbandb Donor
Offline

Joined: October 31st, 2005, 2:21 am
Posts: 4471
Location: England england
RS Name: Kangas Khan
RS Status: P2P
Clan Name: MaSoRs
Hmm...

Its a bit boring.. I dont like the font, render, or colours.

5/10 (it's just not that interesting, sorry)

_________________
Image


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 4:26 pm 
Adamantite Member
Offline

Joined: October 2nd, 2005, 12:00 pm
Posts: 161
RS Name: Oh Four
RS Status: Classic
Anubis wrote:
Hmm...

Its a bit boring.. I dont like the font, render, or colours.

5/10 (it's just not that interesting, sorry)


Hmm, last time I checked, C/C didn't mean "tell me what you dont like". C/C means tell me what I should do better next time or what you LIKED and disliked, saying "It's just not that interesting" without even saying how to make it more. Be more clear.

Here's an example:

-I don't like how the car was placed. You should of added a motion blur to make a better effect and used more brushes, because your lacking them. I'll give it a 5/10.

_________________
Image


Last edited by Oh Four on December 14th, 2005, 4:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 4:32 pm 
Rsbandb Donor
Offline

Joined: October 31st, 2005, 2:21 am
Posts: 4471
Location: England england
RS Name: Kangas Khan
RS Status: P2P
Clan Name: MaSoRs
I'm sorry, but I didnt know you needed it so simply - Make It More Interesting.

There are so many more things you could have done to it, yes, motion blur was one, different colours instead of one shade, animation? I could give you a list but it would be quite large.

Of course... not to start argueing, but didnt you once on one of my threads quote someone else and say ^what they said^ ?

_________________
Image


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 4:40 pm 
Adamantite Member
Offline

Joined: October 2nd, 2005, 12:00 pm
Posts: 161
RS Name: Oh Four
RS Status: Classic
Yes, and that person decribed their post like I have shown to you, and I agreed with what they said.

_________________
Image


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 8:44 pm 
Dragon Member
Offline

Joined: April 7th, 2005, 11:02 am
Posts: 4620
Location: Canifis, with the other Russian NPCs de
RS Name: FungiMonarch
RS Status: P2P
Clan Name: The Hot Nuns of Taverley
Well, there's no point in posting if you agreed with what they said!

Anyway, I don't actually think this is boring. You showed the back of the car instead of the front and you managed to make it look interesting.. That's something that no one really does. The background..hmm..I don't really like the motion blur but you did alright with adding blue saturation to it. The only thing that I think you really need to work on is the text. Text is a really important thing. I think the main problem is the font you chose, you choose easy-to-read fonts (which is great, i hate those unreadable splatter-y fonts) but they also happen to be unexciting and not eye-catching. Overall, it's an alright sig that could use a few corrections.

_________________
Image


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Register and login to get these in-post ads to disappear
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 8:44 pm 
Dragon Member

Joined: September 9th, 2004, 1:47am
Posts: 9047
Location: In your web browserz


Top
  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 14th, 2005, 8:56 pm 
Rsbandb Donor
Offline

Joined: October 25th, 2004, 10:12 pm
Posts: 3055
Location: New Zealand nz
RS Name: Chief. Snake
RS Status: Retired
Clan Name: Bits and Bytes
Could have changed the font, I don't think it suits the render and it looks quite stretched. And it doesn't really need exhaust fumes either. :wink: I like the colours though and the background isn't bad either.

_________________


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 15th, 2005, 9:18 pm 
Mithril Member
Offline

Joined: August 21st, 2005, 11:26 pm
Posts: 130
Location: computer table
RS Name: King Dean2
RS Status: P2P
Clan Name: Sacred Templars
i like it its pretty cool buy i dont know how you could improve it :roll:

_________________
Image


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 16th, 2005, 7:59 am 
Runite Member
User avatar
Offline

Joined: April 15th, 2005, 7:32 am
Posts: 583
Location: World 36
RS Name: Sneak1230
RS Status: F2P
pretty cool, i think it looks kinda like a pixel stretch on the left the background is pretty cool, but i think you could do a little more with the text 8/10

_________________
Image

In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.

~Robert Frost


| Proud RSB&B Member #2914 | 1008 is my F2P total level |
| I'm retiring from runescape, click here to get my stuff | Did you know that party hats have a secret where.... |


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject:
PostPosted: December 16th, 2005, 11:32 am 
Runite Member
User avatar
Offline

Joined: November 9th, 2005, 6:48 am
Posts: 339
Location: in a box behind wall mart
RS Status: Classic
not bad, i like the bg and the color u used. the font does need some work though. 8/10

_________________
Image
You've never heard of me because I haven't been on the site in almost a year.|Pic of some noob trying to insult a mod.|
|FREE RARES!!!!!!!!!|RSB&B Member 13132|
|My Blog|


Top
 Profile  
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic This topic is locked, you cannot edit posts or make further replies. Forum Index » Off-Topic » Non-RuneScape Discussion » Graphics Central » Car Sig Page 1 of 1 [ 10 posts ]

You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum

Jump to: