Attempt number 3

So here it is... All help appreciated =]

i think that it looks fine.. i like the color blending! it helps bring out kriby a lot! nice job

wow, i cant do that lmao
wat did u use?

1. The white lines are out of place. You should take them out or replace them with a border that goes around the whole sig.
2. There's no focus on the sig. The render is a bit blurry/low on opacity, so either sharpen that or darken the surrounding background. Adding a focal point of light would also help.
3. Your text needs work. The plain green text is a bit hard to read.
4. Try to use a different effect other than just duplicating the render, blurring it, and setting it to overlay. Add more brushes, use different colors, etc.

hmm i dont get the white lines maybe if you placed somewhere else and the text doesnt match the sig so use diffrent text but besides that it looks good

Imo it looks gross. Idk what attempt number 1 looked like but yeah. . . I don't like how kirby and the background clash.