[Draw] ... Ok, this time I tried.

Evelyn · **Posted:** April 29th, 2007, 11:29 am

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54158262/

I took my time and it took two more hours than how long my drawings take.

Comment here or on dA.

Adbot · **Posted:** April 29th, 2007, 11:29 am

Richard · **Posted:** April 29th, 2007, 11:34 am

Love the background, only problems are that his arms look too thin and his eyes look a tad bit crossed. Also, you should try coloring your pictures in GIMP or Photoshop, they would probably look pretty cool.

Cowboyofdeath · **Posted:** April 29th, 2007, 12:59 pm

WONDERFUL!

Lol, as the above person said, the proportions are off, yet again. His arms are too thin and well...long-ish.

The background is amazing. I love it. I like how the lines burst out and scream l33tness!

9/10, just fix your proportions!

Ranging God · **Posted:** April 29th, 2007, 3:01 pm

^agree with above.

1. His eyes are cross eyed. Make the pupils stair straight.
2. Add some texture to his skin, bone structure, muscle. ect

Not a bad start, keep practicing