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Daniel · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 11:52 am

well my first try at a C4D abstract

C4D from BlinX of ChaosGFX

Adbot · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 11:52 am

- Tom - · 25/11/2006

thats VERY nice :shock:

10/10

Anubis · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 1:12 pm

It looks cool, i guess, im not too big a fan of 3d abstract renders cause well.. yeah. lol. But you didnt do that so hmm. :\

If you could post the link to the original render I may be able to critisize more, because all I see right now, is a "raw flesh"-like render with a bit of orange behind it :\

Kronic · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 4:15 pm

As i said on NGX,

Its pretty good. However, it could use a better bg, and a good focal point like an explosion or somehting along those lines. :wink:

Daniel · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 10:47 pm

heres the render:

Dave · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 10:55 pm

I'd say you did a good job. I like this style of work. The abstract makes it look great. The coloring you used was good. I can't give professional advice on this type of art like Anubis can, but you did a good job.

Adbot · **Posted:** March 29th, 2006, 10:55 pm

Anubis · **Posted:** March 30th, 2006, 5:24 am

Dave wrote:

I can't give professional advice on this type of art like Anubis can

- Anyways...

Well the main problems I see with your peice were on the actual render, so that peice of critique can be thrown out the window -.-

The background you did certainly fits the render, I suppose it could have had a slightly more reddish hue other than orange/brown.

Not much I can suggest since the render takes up most of the peice, but I would try to find a 'better' render for next time. I just dont like the matirial/colour used with it, the reflections look very odd. And theres two focus points :\

Good job for a first time though.

Crysala · **Posted:** March 30th, 2006, 8:36 am

Well I like it, Anubis is right about the 2 focus points but I think that makes it interesting. Plus, C4D work is particularly hard to master I think, nice work.

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** March 30th, 2006, 2:48 pm

I don't really think the background fits the render. Not in terms of colour, but in terms of just..style. There are just these weird browns and red-browns smeared behind it with grey around it. The text looks alright though.

Robbie · **Posted:** March 30th, 2006, 3:28 pm

My professional advice - It's good

It would have been better had I didn't know that that was a render, but instead made it yourself.

rikusora321 · **Posted:** March 31st, 2006, 6:55 am

its good, im just not a big fan of 3d renders either