An Advertisement I made

Jeff · **Posted:** July 23rd, 2009, 9:26 pm

Ever seen the iPhone "There's an app for that" commercial?

Here's my version for a website.

Let me know how I can improve.

Adbot · **Posted:** July 23rd, 2009, 9:26 pm

Burnt Joint · **Posted:** July 23rd, 2009, 10:27 pm

The only thing that I would change is when you say "...there's also a learning path for that." Advertisements don't need to be Grammatically correct; the target audience need to be able to relate, so I'd change it to something more colloquial like "...yep; there's a learning path for that, too." Or something along those lines :oops:

Al3X · **Posted:** July 23rd, 2009, 10:59 pm

The music was a bit too loud compared to your voice. Otherwise I don't have any problems with it.

Italy4life · **Posted:** July 24th, 2009, 3:07 pm

ur voice was a little bit hard to hear with the comparison to the music.

Duke Juker · RSBandB Donor since 07/01/2010

Nice. I like the parody. It is a well done commercial

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