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Iron Maiden
 Post subject: Another Life
PostPosted: December 6th, 2008, 9:30 pm 
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Probally my saddest,deepest and...whatever you want song...enjoy...well idk if you should...

Stop this pain
All is lost and nothing gained
All theses effort were in vain
My deep sins are too many
Guilt way too heavy
I feel I'm no longer myself
But maybe someone else
I'm lost within my neverland
Oh god tell me, How I made with my hands

Whatever I tried
You were never satisfied
I try to explain what makes me angry
And you scream at me
You give me a mind of stone
I think I'm better off alone
Open the doors
Enter Hell's core

I'll see you in another life

So, I will leave you here
With your guilt and your fears
It's time for me to end my days
Nothing else to say
I tried to please them all
Today, They tried everything to make me fall
I couldnt lead them to wisedom
Now I ask for my eternal freedom
I take a look at my last sky
Guessing no one will even cry...

I'll see you in another life...

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PostPosted: December 6th, 2008, 9:30 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Another Life
PostPosted: December 6th, 2008, 10:42 pm 
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Your inner cadence with the syllables has improved from your previous songs. I like it. Your topic and theme is a little darker than what I prefer, but that is merely taste and style. Overall I think you've got a great song. Have you been putting music to any of these? Do you play an instrument?

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