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Post subject: Out Of The Dark ~ A poem by me on the Holocaust Posted: June 1st, 2007, 3:59 pm |
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Hey, this is a poem by me on the Holocaust, please tell me what you think.
The Holocaust is a very close topic to me and I have learned much about it. It is important to remember what went on so that it will not happen again. Here it is...
Out Of The Dark ~ by me
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The news is circling around
You can’t just sit and wait to be found
Packing upstairs
Ready to run
This could be your last time to see the sun
Down the backstreet
Try and stay up beat
Weight holding you down
Arrive very soon
All locked in one room
Nothing to spare
Must all share
No time to fight
Stay quiet day and night
You have no fear
For you believe the war’s end is near
Time slowly ticks bye
Never has one tear left your eye
Information comes gradually these days
Some of your family has been taken away
But that is just what they say
You wake up one morning
Wishing for the end
Quickly get up and jump out of bed
Wondering what could be going through their heads
You hear commotion from outside
No where to run and no where to hide
Look forward to the times ahead
As you have one last bit of bread
Pounding on the door
You know you are safe no more
Quietly pack
What you have in a small sack
Follow them out the door
At last you can live in uncertainty no more
You take one last look at the sun
Then turn your attention to the barrel of a gun
You see your past and future in each one
And you know that your future doesn’t end right there
You dream about your new life without care
You board the cart about to embark
On your new life out of the dark
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Thanks for reading hope you enjoyed, and if you like it I may post another poem on the Holocaust.\
Oh and as Ranging God pointed out, tell me how you interperted the ending, thanks rf10s7
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Last edited by Sidespin on June 2nd, 2007, 7:33 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post subject: Register and login to get these in-post ads to disappear Posted: June 1st, 2007, 3:59 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: June 2nd, 2007, 1:18 pm |
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Post subject: Posted: June 2nd, 2007, 7:10 pm |
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thanks for your comments everyone, It's ok to have 3 thumbs lol.
And yes I do have a poem by me sort of on the trip and life there and evcauation and liberation, I guess since you seem to like this I'll be posting it also. Look for it, it's called Never Give In. Be looking for it, I am posting it now!
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