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PostPosted: May 13th, 2007, 3:59 pm 
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So, this poem was based off of my fractal: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55263679/

A sparkle in the river
A twinkle in the sea
A single ocean sliver
A sea diamond it could be

A shining star
An ocean plea
A jewel without a scar
A sea diamond it could be

A lifeless entity
A rich lost to see
A hidden identity
A sea diamond it could be

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It is a good poem. Also I like it because it goes with the Art work too = )

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The imagery is good in this one. I don't really like the second verse though, I don't think it fits well. :s

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