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 Post subject: The death of a poor man.
PostPosted: May 12th, 2007, 7:21 pm 
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As the wind blows by
A hearse drives through the neighborhood.
Poor Tom, he was so careless.
Silence loomed all over the neighborhood.

Housewifes and children stood at their doorsteps
Watching the death of a good soul.
For he was no stranger
Everyone was his friend

A poor man whose life crushed
By his own carelessness
He finally lies with his beloved wife
Once again they reunite till eternity.


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PostPosted: May 12th, 2007, 7:21 pm 
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Good poem. Is it about drugs, or alcohol?

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PostPosted: May 13th, 2007, 6:37 am 
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I like the last verse, a nice way to write about death, even though what was said is open to discussion. Keep it up man. :)

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Yeah, I like how it doesn't really say how he died, but that he was loved. Almost everyone can relate to that feeling. Good job.

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