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Post subject: Runescape Jingle Bells  Posted: December 15th, 2010, 11:49 am |
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Hello people,
As it is the holiday season, I have created my own little version of jingle bells, but it's slayer themed
Tower Christmas(to the tune of "Jingle Bells")
Dashing through a swamp
A godsword at my side
to go and try to kill
the creatures that there reside
I've got a super-set
and a backpack full of shark
what fun it is to fight sing
this slaying song in the dark!
Oh! Up a floor, through a door
there's a banshee scream
I hope these earmuffs do job
and I don't become a meme
comments, praise, constructive criticism and other parodies welcome!
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Last edited by Brimmk on December 15th, 2010, 7:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Register and login to get these in-post ads to disappear Posted: December 15th, 2010, 11:49 am |
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Post subject: Re: Runescape Jingle Bells Posted: December 15th, 2010, 7:33 pm |
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sorry, i had forgotten a line, i think it should be better now
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Post subject: Re: Runescape Jingle Bells Posted: December 19th, 2010, 9:37 pm |
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Yeah I agree with trekkie,
The syllables per line dont match up so well, for example "the creatures that there reside" line has 1 syllable too many in my oppinion
And the line before it "to go and try to kill" has too many 1 syllable words which makes it feel jagged.
It could be amazing.
It's pretty good now though.
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Post subject: Register and login to get these in-post ads to disappear Posted: December 28th, 2010, 11:27 am |
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Post subject: Re: Runescape Jingle Bells Posted: January 5th, 2011, 6:09 pm |
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Thanks guys! It was just a little inspiration one day, and I decided to write it down and post for laughs
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