"Close to Home" - Space peice

Cold Fussion · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 12:09 am

tried space for once :shock:

C+C please

It dosn't look conplete, but i've ran out of ideas and sick of working on it

Adbot · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 12:09 am

Tjbartz2009 · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 10:49 am

I really dont like it at all sorry to say :oops:

It looks like the whole thing has a watery effect to it and it looks like everything is splotchy

5/10

PhoenixEmpire · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 10:51 am

yeah, make some of the land features on earth be greener and make the nebula behind earth smoother. it is really blotchy for space...

6/10

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 11:36 am

I'm sort of confused on what style you wanted to use with this. It doesn't look realistic enough, and it doesn't look surreal enough. The clouds are a little too swirly in some part and the clouds behind the earth are too choppy. I guess the only way I can sum this piece up is as very incomplete. Hopefully you can smooth out the wrinkles.

Rafe · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 11:41 am

Here's my take: it is okay from a visual perspective. However, the planet is very wet the clouds are repetitive, the edge of the planet are shaky, the stars and nebula are unrealistic, and the land is also repetitive. Work on it.
Elias Cain // Rafe Forkbed

Dave · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 11:44 am

I have a opposite feedback then everyone else so far. It looks quite unique to me. It doesn't look like you just got a picture of space and made a few minor changes to it. You did a lot, it looks pretty good.

I will agree it looks a little complete. I would be out of ideas to add right now though. This is an alright one, but you can probably make better,

7/10

Adbot · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 11:44 am

Cold Fussion · **Posted:** March 18th, 2006, 2:31 pm

thanks for comments