No personal attacks in your comments, guys...
The text, as Iron Maiden said, sort of blends in a bit, the green overlap on the test makes it a bit hard to see, so that it sticks out in a bad way. I'd consider splitting up the "Revenge" and the "It's a *****" parts, just for comedic value.
I'm not sure about the green and white bubbles in the background though, it kind of makes it seem like they're taking a bubble bath together or something.
I like what you've done with the renders though, and despite what I said above, the green suits well with the theme of the signature. Good work matey, you're getting better.