Ice N' Flames

americigerm · **Posted:** July 28th, 2009, 12:18 pm

This is also my SOTW entry, I wanted some feedback on it:

Quote:

Darker:

Lighter(Entry):

Please CnC!

Adbot · **Posted:** July 28th, 2009, 12:18 pm

Al3X · **Posted:** July 28th, 2009, 2:07 pm

It's decent. Really grungy and the focal seems to be the left wing looking thing. The background looks OK, but isn't too firey.

I think the darker one is better. Almost looks like the r is missing in your name on there.

Humus · **Posted:** July 28th, 2009, 4:50 pm

Contrastt!
Just doesn't look good to me. Its way too hard to determine the focal, and when you do, you (well, I) can't tell what it actually is. :(

americigerm · **Posted:** July 29th, 2009, 4:12 pm

So trying to blend in the subject isn't the way to go? that makes no sense, and goes against everything I've learned.

Mushroom Queen · **Posted:** July 29th, 2009, 4:35 pm

No, what people are saying is that the background is so contrasted that it's throwing off the colours of the render. The edges of the wings are all feathery and then BAM HERES A REALLY BRIGHT ORANGE, YELLOW, AND BLACK BACKGROUND. Combined, it makes everything look mismatched. I'd recommend redoing the background at this point, if you want to. I'm sorry if my c/c sounded harsh, but I'm really just trying to explain why people said what they said.

Sev · **Posted:** July 29th, 2009, 7:02 pm

You really can't plend it to much, nor to little. Just the right amount.

You blended the render a bit to much for my tastes, and theres a lot of contrast in the colors.

Adbot · **Posted:** July 29th, 2009, 7:02 pm