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 Post subject: Prototype *updated*
PostPosted: July 19th, 2009, 10:22 am 
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I haven't made a signature for a while - well I made on for Regnenth but I haven't made one with a render/stock that I chose for myself, as I can never think of what to do.

So here's one I made:
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v2 (added glow, smoothed off the render's edges)
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v3 (smoothed off bits missed around hand, got rid of the blue and added some colours from his jacket)
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I couldn't find anything to fill the bottom left corner and it's not really a special signature in any way. Just wondering what you guys thought of it and what I can do to improve it.

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 Post subject: Re: Prototype
PostPosted: July 19th, 2009, 10:27 am 
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The cutting out of the render and the blending is pretty bad. There's little bits of his former background floating around him and stuff. Either use a precutout render or cut it out better :D The render also just looks like it's been plonked onto a quite nice (but unsuitable) background. it needs some outer glow or something to make it fade into the background a bit better.

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 Post subject: Re: Prototype
PostPosted: July 19th, 2009, 10:33 am 
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I knew there was something. I could see it but I couldn't tell what it was, and what you mean unsuitable? What would make it more suitable (the background).

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 Post subject: Re: Prototype *updated*
PostPosted: July 19th, 2009, 11:22 am 
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I mean that the colours arent too suitable. You probably should've used the colour of his jacket mixed with the red. The new version is better but I can still see little bits around his hands. It really annoys me for some reason :P

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 Post subject: Re: Prototype *updated*
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I've changed the colours from dark blue to the colour of his jacket, used a few different shades in it.

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 Post subject: Re: Prototype *updated*
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I like it much more now :D Great stuff

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