The tower, the six moons and glowy orbs in the sand

Slimppu · **Posted:** July 17th, 2009, 6:16 pm

I, for one, do not know what to think of it, so I'll leave it up to you to decide. Any critique is appreciated.

Adbot · **Posted:** July 17th, 2009, 6:16 pm

hummerwar921 · **Posted:** July 17th, 2009, 6:22 pm

Wow that is amazing. i like it

It reminds me of this...

Spoiler for 56K Suicide:

Kenny · **Posted:** July 17th, 2009, 6:45 pm

I love it. I agree it does look like something from Halo. Is that a stock or something?

Slimppu · **Posted:** July 17th, 2009, 6:49 pm

Are you talking about the sig or Hummer's picture? If the sig, I made it almost entirely from scratch. The only exception is the sky, I used a wallpaper to make it.

Evelyn · **Posted:** July 17th, 2009, 7:04 pm

Hummer's tower reminds me of the citadel in HL2.

Your sig reminds me of the Castle flash series from Newgrounds.

Kenny · **Posted:** July 18th, 2009, 6:24 am

Slimppu wrote:

Are you talking about the sig or Hummer's picture? If the sig, I made it almost entirely from scratch. The only exception is the sky, I used a wallpaper to make it.

I meant your's. Wow, that makes it even more awesome. Amazing stuff.

Adbot · **Posted:** July 18th, 2009, 6:24 am

Slimppu · **Posted:** July 18th, 2009, 6:32 am

Here's the original sketch:

Picture taken with a crappy cell phone camera, thus the bad quality.

Jaden · **Posted:** July 18th, 2009, 7:25 pm

Actually that looks pretty dang cool.

Chief Snake · **Posted:** July 18th, 2009, 8:27 pm

The moons are very plain and I think that's what makes the end piece come off as a bit amateurish for me, however you've done an excellent job of everything else. Particularly for the purple, red and blue moons, as those are the most visible, you should add some more variation in texture.

I have something wrong with my eyes because I didn't even see the glowy orbs until I looked a second time and they appeared out of nowhere. XD

Slimppu · **Posted:** July 19th, 2009, 4:46 am

Chief Snake wrote:

The moons are very plain and I think that's what makes the end piece come off as a bit amateurish for me, however you've done an excellent job of everything else. Particularly for the purple, red and blue moons, as those are the most visible, you should add some more variation in texture.

I have something wrong with my eyes because I didn't even see the glowy orbs until I looked a second time and they appeared out of nowhere. XD

Congratulations, you're the first one in this topic to give me any actual critique. Although it does go to a waste since the plain look is what I intended...

I suppose I could see what I can do to them.