First in forever

Al3X · **Posted:** June 10th, 2009, 4:29 pm

Ya, as most of you know I finally got my new computer meaning I can get back into sig making. This was my first signature in a while so I'm still brushing up. Plus I was recording myslef for a tutorial on my new channel (TechniTuts so I was a bit nervous/feeling awkward because I had to talk to myself lol.

Think I finally chose some good text, the render just gives a feeling of depression and sadness.

C&C and suggestions for improving.

Ill post the link to the tut after it's uploaded if anyone is interested in seeing it.

Adbot · **Posted:** June 10th, 2009, 4:29 pm

Steven · **Posted:** June 10th, 2009, 5:58 pm

It's good, but you should go back and go in it's glasses and try to make the glare blue and not red.

It's good. 5/5

Al3X · **Posted:** June 10th, 2009, 6:02 pm

Steven wrote:

It's good, but you should go back and go in it's glasses and try to make the glare blue and not red.

It's good. 5/5

Was red on the original but Ill see If I can do that, and if it looks good.

Veggie Eater · **Posted:** June 10th, 2009, 6:44 pm

Aw I like it. It does give an impression of depression/sadness so you definitely got your point across. [And I really like all the blue of course]

Nice job

Al3X · **Posted:** June 10th, 2009, 7:35 pm

Veggie Eater wrote:

Aw I like it. It does give an impression of depression/sadness so you definitely got your point across. [And I really like all the blue of course]

Nice job

Thanks Veggie

Dokter Bob · **Posted:** June 11th, 2009, 11:16 am

Steven wrote:

It's good, but you should go back and go in it's glasses and try to make the glare blue and not red.

It's good. 5/5

The red makes it look like the soldier is running into a sure-death battle, preferably with a lot of fire and explosions or something. And the "Despair" accompanies that pretty well. :wink:

5/5

Adbot · **Posted:** June 11th, 2009, 11:16 am

Humus · **Posted:** June 11th, 2009, 11:57 am

Dokter Bob wrote:

Steven wrote:

It's good, but you should go back and go in it's glasses and try to make the glare blue and not red.

It's good. 5/5

The red makes it look like the soldier is running into a sure-death battle, preferably with a lot of fire and explosions or something. And the "Despair" accompanies that pretty well. :wink:

5/5

Yeah I agree. If you could expand the red a bit more, make it brighter and more noticeable it will make it looks better. Also the text looks a bit big. Make it smaller.