practice web design

Humus · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 12:22 pm

My second web design everrr
v1: http://crimpshrimp.deviantart.com/art/d ... n-practice-124350406
v2: http://crimpshrimp.deviantart.com/art/d ... ractice-v2-124356721

Please comment here and/or on deviantART!

Adbot · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 12:22 pm

Kirby · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 1:03 pm

WOW. If you are going to make that into your graphic website, you'll probably need to go to somebody else other than me. That is amazing! I have no criticism whatsover over anything. The background, however, might need to be dumbed down (if you do decide to make it into a real website) due to extreme bandwith sizes.

Humus · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 1:09 pm

Kirby wrote:

WOW. If you are going to make that into your graphic website, you'll probably need to go to somebody else other than me. That is amazing! I have no criticism whatsover over anything. The background, however, might need to be dumbed down (if you do decide to make it into a real website) due to extreme bandwith sizes.

Thankyou!

Made a v2, which imo is a whole lot better:
http://crimpshrimp.deviantart.com/art/d ... ractice-v2-124356721

Killjoy · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 1:16 pm

I like the 2.0 better. Its alot cleaner. Very good! Keep up the good work. You have alot of tallent.

Al3X · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 3:33 pm

Nice job, doesn't look like there are any flaws either.

jsbrules2 · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 3:49 pm

wow those look great, gl with other designs.

Adbot · **Posted:** May 31st, 2009, 3:49 pm

Bogrollbloke · **Posted:** June 2nd, 2009, 4:37 am

Criticism: On your first one, there is seemingly a text box behind the text "desinspiration" which is blurry. Minor but it's there. Also the top background is very pixellated, as if it was originally a little bit smaller than it is now.

However your second one is pretty good. The only problem with that is that it's too bare. It needs more content perhaps, or some sort of side bar maybe.

Humus · **Posted:** June 2nd, 2009, 8:16 am

Bogrollbloke wrote:

Criticism: On your first one, there is seemingly a text box behind the text "desinspiration" which is blurry. Minor but it's there. Also the top background is very pixellated, as if it was originally a little bit smaller than it is now.

However your second one is pretty good. The only problem with that is that it's too bare. It needs more content perhaps, or some sort of side bar maybe.

Yeah the box was intentional. Without it, you couldn't read the text very well. The main header background is actually the same texture I used for the background, but I used paint daubs on it which is why it looks pixelated. I can see now that v1 is pretty horrible.

I see what you mean by it looking bare, thats what I thought when I made it, but I couldn't quite find anything to put in there that would make it look better.

Jaden · **Posted:** June 4th, 2009, 8:15 pm

the text strokes on the menu are too bold in my opinion.

sweet work!