leave

Humus · **Posted:** May 6th, 2009, 1:38 pm

v1

v2

Really don't like the text much, but without it it looks a little empty. And Im just not generally happy with how this signature came out, but still, its something.

Adbot · **Posted:** May 6th, 2009, 1:38 pm

Al3X · **Posted:** May 6th, 2009, 5:02 pm

It looks ok but a bit crowded. stock please?

Humus · **Posted:** May 7th, 2009, 9:22 am

Al3X wrote:

It looks ok but a bit crowded. stock please?

Not sure If I can find it again. I'll edit if I do.
edit: http://s170.photobucket.com/albums/u256 ... nt=1184188645030.jpg
+second version up

Killjoy · **Posted:** May 7th, 2009, 1:22 pm

why did you blur out the doll?

Al3X · **Posted:** May 7th, 2009, 2:27 pm

Humus wrote:

Al3X wrote:

It looks ok but a bit crowded. stock please?

Not sure If I can find it again. I'll edit if I do.
edit: http://s170.photobucket.com/albums/u256 ... nt=1184188645030.jpg
+second version up

The stock looks like the picture was taken with a bad camera, would make the overall appearance of the signature not as good.

The effects and filters you applied definitely blend well with the stock, I like it without the text a lot more than with.

Also, in the original why the choice of the word "leave"?

Kenny · **Posted:** May 7th, 2009, 11:46 pm

Al3X wrote:

Humus wrote:

Al3X wrote:

It looks ok but a bit crowded. stock please?

Not sure If I can find it again. I'll edit if I do.
edit: http://s170.photobucket.com/albums/u256 ... nt=1184188645030.jpg
+second version up

The stock looks like the picture was taken with a bad camera, would make the overall appearance of the signature not as good.

The effects and filters you applied definitely blend well with the stock, I like it without the text a lot more than with.

Also, in the original why the choice of the word "leave"?

I'm the guessing the word 'leave' because she is kissing the doll's hand as if she is leaving somewhere else.

Adbot · **Posted:** May 7th, 2009, 11:46 pm

Chief Snake · **Posted:** May 8th, 2009, 5:48 am

Not one of your better signatures. As Al3X said it's quite crowded and I don't know where to look, then also the colouring really turns me off it. Can't put my finger on why, but perhaps it's that the greeny-yellow mixed with purple is simply a little sickly. :oops:

I should have mentioned that I loved your Thor signature; to me it was flawless, and I'm a little disheartened that the only vote it received in SOTW 202 was mine... but oh well. XDXD I have to admit Harkaan's signature for the same week was fantastic as well and was going to instantly get my vote until you entered.
Really must get back into the habit of commenting here.

Humus · **Posted:** May 8th, 2009, 8:18 am

Okay lol didn't expect 4 new replies! :mrgreen:

Soo
Killjoy, I was trying out new effects like using the spot healing brush which I have now realised is a bloody awesome tool if you want some interesting effects, I kinda got carried away with it and toltally blurred out the doll by accident. :oops:

I can see now that the stock wasn't the best of choices, but for some reason I took a shine to it when I saw it so whatever, I've used it now and I cant change it now so w/e

Kenny nailed it on the head, I originally had "Go" which now seems more fitting as the word "leave" sounds a bit more like go away or **** off etc xD
And Chief, sad to hear you don't like it. I can see what you mean, the focal isn't established enough (why is it that you always looks a signature a day later and think "oh god, what was I thinking?!"). I too prefer the Thor signature and tbh Im think its my best but ahh well. And yes you need to start commenting here again! And making art! Theres been a very big lull in the amount of posts here recently.