rate my apple

99887 · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 1:52 am

This is my first 3D render, C&C and rate please

Adbot · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 1:52 am

Tjbartz2009 · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 5:10 am

Doesnt look to bad for your first

The only things I can see wrong are at the bottom of the apple its kinda choppy and the stem is way to thick and its a little off center. Other than that I'd say its a pretty good 3D Render of an apple.

Good Job

Kirby · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 7:02 am

Congratz for your first 3D! As Tj said though, it is choppy. Try making the apple shorter, though.

Shadow Assassin · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 3:00 pm

Yum

Nice apple. Very nice especially for the first one.

Now it needs to be made into a a pie...

Chief Snake · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 7:56 pm

Kirby wrote:

Try making the apple shorter, though.

Nah, apples come in all shapes and sizes. Only the commercial hybrids look perfect.

Edges are just a bit sharp and the stem looks pretty fat, otherwise I think it looks great for a first. I've never successfully managed to render anything myself, anyways. :oops:

Unbirthday · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 8:23 pm

Looks a little bruised around the edges. XD Idk if i'd eat it.
good job, but fix the green/brownish part.

Adbot · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 8:23 pm

99887 · **Posted:** November 8th, 2007, 8:26 pm

Shadow Assassin wrote:

Now it needs to be made into a a pie...

I'll take you on your word seeing as it was my first render I used a tutorial I wont use one for pie.

Dokter Bob · **Posted:** November 11th, 2007, 5:43 am

Haha, when I read "Apple", I thought you meant the computer Apple. :lol:

I think in the bottom left corner it seems a little to much lit up, but I'm no expert on that kind of stuff. :wink: