Far Forgotten

I really want advance critique on this. Post any suggestions because any suggestion could help for improvements.

I like this, but use the Liquify tool in PS to make her right eye the same size as her left eye. I would also recommend using a brush for her hair. If you use a hair strand brush, you could add some really good detail to her hair.

Hm, the text. It's a little hard to notice since it's all too light. Try to maybe add a dark-ish stroke around the text and lower the opacity of the outer glow to even things out.

Other than that, this is a major improvement from the trophies you posted. The colours are good. I like the underwater look. Maybe you could use a bubble brush to add some bubbles and stuff. Hm, there's still lots you can do with this. I like it though.