Help ((Requisites: Anime fan who saw Hellsing, expirience))

This is more on the lines of looks -in game- but I still saw it as a visual problem. I am trying to get my character, xdraculinax to look like seras... now she is a mage so I chose a mith chain, cut hair, clingy black pants, gloves.... and so on, if anyone could take a look at me (In game becasue I am wasting photobucket space)) and give me some ideas, I'd love it... Hey! Even snide remarks are nice too! ^^