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 Post subject: desinspiration: welcome page
PostPosted: June 24th, 2009, 9:30 am 
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http://crimpshrimp.deviantart.com/art/d ... lcome-page-127074392

What do you think? I haven't ironed out all the creases yet; there are a lot of things there that I might change.


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PostPosted: June 24th, 2009, 9:30 am 
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 Post subject: Re: desinspiration: welcome page
PostPosted: June 24th, 2009, 10:38 am 
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What about a link to your graphic resource page? I know I talked to you about it already but it definately needs something on the band and top. It's just too bland. I like the other stuff though.

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 Post subject: Re: desinspiration: welcome page
PostPosted: June 25th, 2009, 4:16 am 
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That looks really awesome - the only thing bothering me is that the entire thing is desaturated! I think it would work really effectively if you fully saturated perhaps one or two small elements of it, to bring out some contrast. I'd recommend doing some experimenting: try colouring just some of the text for example, then maybe just a small element of the background... I don't know. Colour is good - especially in Web 2.0 - so don't be afraid of it. :P

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 Post subject: Re: desinspiration: welcome page
PostPosted: June 25th, 2009, 10:15 am 
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Looks nice but I think it needs a bit more color, it's seems a bit bland right now. Try CS' advice.


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 Post subject: Re: desinspiration: welcome page
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Bland. Very bland. Not very inviting for the first viewer. :cry: Maybe more color would make it better.

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 Post subject: Re: desinspiration: welcome page
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I agree with Kill, I think it needs more color. I love color personally.

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