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Not bad. Same sort of format as your others. You've got good word choices, but I always have a hard time finding the rhythm in your poems.
Now, if there's anything I hate more in the world, it's the spread of depression. Those annoying people who can't see that despite the circumstances, that there is always something positive to everything.
So I'm going to MAKE FUN OF IT!!!
Now,This is the end
He ran out of licorice.
A poisoned gift they sent
A totally innocent looking bottle of bleach ...
Things are no longer the same
A democrat's now the US president, but what are you gonna do?
I dont want to live again
It's just a waste of 25 cents now.
Cant face this hell
That's because somebody screwed your head on backwards.
I'm hiding in my shell
This is what wireless internet is doing to our bodies ...
While I cry
I laugh. CANADA BEAM!
Wishing I could die
Immortality's a pain, isn't it?
I drown myself into the sea
You're supposed to breathe into the scuba tank MOUTHPIECE, idiot!
I dont want to be me
I want to be "my".
Cant face the past
So leg it.
I once believed
Big mistake.
My dreams are destroyed...
Someone smashed his dream-catcher with a hammer.
Nothing more to give
Repeat after me: Charities are a scam. Community Services are a waste of time. You don't have to give blood every 6 hours.
I no longer want to live
Me wanna be a ZOMBIE!
My soul is now crumbuling
Crum-buling? Your soul is falling into a cow?
Your love I couldnt get
I think the braces might have had something to do with it.
Oh god, I dont wanna see the death
Horray for blindfolds!
I drown myself into the sea
That sounds ike a fun hobby ...
I dont want to be me
He wants to be "I".
Cant face the past
It's got acne.
I once believed
That I was a good singer. Yeah ... I once believed that ...
My dreams are destroyed...
American Idol can go die.
If I could fly
I'd probably run head-first into stuff.
Reach the sky
With amazingly long arms ...
Spent so many time with loneliness
... uh ... spent so many time? Is "time" a currency or something that you must pay to have some peace and quiet?
Now with emptiness
You'll have to buy another bucket of ice cream ...
No one else can remplace you
But I can REBUILD! Mwa ha ha ha ha!
Cut this **** off from me...
You've got four stars on you? Dear me, that's like 8 out of 10! You rule!
I drown myself into the sea
*Calling* Next! Number 68 please?
I dont want to be me
He wants to be ... "them"?
Cant face the past
It ... won't ... stop ... moving!
I once believed
That snow was made out of sugar!
My dreams are destroyed...
H tried eating what he thought was butterscotch.
No ones can save my soul, but its too late
Thank goodness it's too late to not save the soul! I'm coming, buddy!
All in all, wasnt it not my fate?
No. Falling down a 9-storey staircase isn't fate, it's FUN!
I tell you to enjoy life
But you don't mean it. TRAITOR! *Red-Ink stamps*
I wish I could but nothing can save me...
Can I have your computer when you die?
I drown myself into the sea
We've got ourselves a show now! Come one, come all!
Can you see?
See! See the crazy psycho depressed dude drown himself in a spectacular feat of guts and cowardice!
What you have done to me
She asked for the remote so she could watch something else than football. A real killer there.
Now I only want to die...
... and garlic bread-sticks. I also want garlic bread-sticks.
My dreams are destroyed...
It was his dog's fault. It woke him up!
Destroyed...
So MAKE SOME NEW ONES! Geez, learn to take a joke for once!
There, MUCH better.
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