... do you really want me to?
It's good, I'll say that. However, after I give feedback, I have a strong urge to 'have fun with it', as you may see throughout the literature forum.
... ah, what the heck.1- No im not obsseded with the word 'darkest' or 'Dark'
Suuuuuure ... wait, what does "obsseded" mean?2- I know it doesnt always rhymes
Don't worry, I'll blame your poor spelling skills ...3- PLEASE, I BEG to dont laugh at my hidden message
It I Be I Love Kath Wow TFI I Love Kath Forever.
... yeah, maybe something I would laugh at. TFI: Totally Fake Information!In a cold night
It's better to stay near stuff that's on fire.The moon is so bright
Because it's on fire.I wipe the sweat from my brow
Don't stand ON the fire!But I'm afraid
That you'll catch cold if you're not on fire.Everything has a price that must be paid
3rd-degree burns for insurance against the flu. Totally worth it.In the Darkest Night
People walk into each other more frequently.Like in the Lightest Sun
Which is legally on fire.Over love and hate
You're in an airplane over California, aren't you?Visualizing your fate
Mmm. Cookie batter.Eternity or Hell's Gate
You've been a very bad boy ...Killer or Keeper
Is this a choice? Are you supposed to choose between getting a killer or a keeper as a roommate or something?Angel or Murderer
Um ... angel. This is a psychological test, isn't it?Trapped or Liberty
Same thing, if you live in America.Heavens Door - We'll fly until infinity
How BORING!On Wings of God
God has wings? Did you see Him??? What does He look like? Do you have His photo? Can you describe Him? Did you get a lock of His hair? Gosh darn it, you sat on God's wings and didn't take get a PICTURE taken?!?We cry for freedom
And are bullied for being crybabies. We're crybabies, but at least we're free crybabies.Take my hand and come
To the supermarket because I really need some hand sanitizer.Follow the angel's path
Brick wall at twelve o-clock! Oh, that had to have hurt!I'll show you that
Brick walls can be fun if you use them right.In the Darkest Night
It's very very hard to see.Like in the Lightest Sun
It's very very harder to see.Over love and hate
You love hating!Visualizing your fate
A three-million dollar portrait of a very rich me. Done. Thanks for the advice.Eternity or Hell's Gate
Comparison time! Both take forever to get through. Easy.Killer or Keeper
Both have legitimate hobbies.Angel or Murderer
Both are ... freaks of nature? No, both deserve their names.Trapped or Liberty
Both involve you being stuck in some way.Heavens Door - We'll fly until infinity
WATCH OUT FOR THAT- ... airplane motor ...Fate or destiny
Both suck.Over the good and the evil
Being good is evil!Reing in hell or eternity
That really shouldn't be an option.Either a dream or a nightmare
You can't even tell if you're dead or not now?Victory against the evil forces - We care
Sounds like a slogan for a NAVY cheerleader organization.Either Hell or Heaven
Doesn't really matter, does it? Nah, didn't think so.Raise and fly, Until you reach the sun
And then you can finally be on fire!!!feedback?
*Holds microphone to its own speaker* There you go.
Darn, your poems are tough to make fun of, because there's nothing really there to reference.
