The Edge of Darkness- My first song/poem

Hi, I was pretty bored, So I tryed to write a song or a poem, Then I came up with this. Remember, This is my FIRST EVER!

The Edge of Darkness

They are taking our lives,
Trying to survive,
To this nightmare
But noones to take care,

I've Walked on the edge of Darkness
Where God couldnt bless
I've walked on the edge of Darkness
Where the pain is endless

I couldnt forsee this fate
I cant keep this Hate
I must get away from this Hell
Burning my Heart and my soul
Slowly thinking Im getting fool
Theres no ones waiting at home

I've Walked on the edge of Darkness
Why is God is protecting me
I've walked on the edge of Darkness
Satan is keeping me

Lord,Give me the wings
Give me a sign
To finally escape from this nightmare
Give me the strength...
Give me the force...
To finally gain my soul's liberty
All I want is to live free

I've Walked on the edge of Darkness
Lord, Dont let me in this place
I've walked on the edge of Darkness
All I can see is, The Devil's Face

Enough...
Satan died...
All demons are gone...
We can finally get back home!,
Theres no more evil...
You are giving our lives back to light...
We won the final fight!...

When I pray,
This is make me remember the day
When I walked on the Edge of Darkness
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So whats ya think ?
Give me feedback plz

Wow thats pretty good... Can I use them for a song?