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 Post subject: Never Give In ~ Another Poem by Me on the Holocaust
PostPosted: June 2nd, 2007, 7:24 pm 
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Well, because a few of you wanted another one, one about life in the camps and the trips, I decided to post this one called Never Give In.
The other one I posted was called Out of the Dark, and is in this very forum....

Well here it is! Please tell me what you think and comment! Again if I get good comments, I'll post more.


Never Give In
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Ripped from your home
Separated from your kin
You almost want to give up and let them win
March in a line
Screaming from behind
Keep on pushing don’t give in
On the train to more pain
People cry as you watch the trees go by
Two lines
Neither fine
Both lead to death and pain
But you don’t give in

Assigned a block
Forward walk
Flavorless soup
A chunk of bread
Never let them get ahead

Time goes by
Never flies
Tears leave your eyes
No more to cry
More people die

You look a Nazi in the eye
Selection
Rejection
Either way you loose
Sick and weak leave
Yet you are reprieved
And you must try and believe

Sick in bed
Thoughts messing with your head
Racing through your brain
Meet your demise now and let go of pain
No
You won’t give in
Clear your mind
Never let them win

Feeling better
You survived this time
March in a line
Evacuation
Relocation
Young and old
Running in the cold
Can’t feel your legs

Wishing for your bed
But you can’t let this get to your head
In a few days time
You are nothing but body
No mind

You finally arrive
And are deprived
Of everything you desperately need
But you will
Never Give up
Never give in
Never let them win

Sleeping in your bed
Dreaming of times ahead
You hear a noise
You leap from your bunk without fear
Run outside
Don’t bother to hide
Liberation

Reincarnation
The war is over
You have won
Plenty of food for everyone

You never gave up
You never gave in
You never let them win
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Hope you enjoyed, I am now making another one more about life in the camps. Please post comments!

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PostPosted: June 2nd, 2007, 7:24 pm 
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He liked my 'Three thumbs up' From last time.
I really like your poems. Keep it up, brotha.

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lol thanks, its still ok to have 3 thumbs!

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