Fable.for every choice,a consequence

crateer · **Posted:** May 28th, 2006, 1:26 pm

This story starts with a small fry called "Avatar." His life was good,but today (it wasn't good.) He was fretting over getting Theresa,his sister,a present for her birthday.He knew she would be quite upset if he didn't give a present,but here's the problem,He didn't have the money! so, he asked his father if he could have 3 gold pieces to buy his sister chocolates,his father said he would only if he heard good things about him.

Please rate this story and tell me if you want Avatar to be good or Evil

Adbot · **Posted:** May 28th, 2006, 1:26 pm

CreepyPirate · **Posted:** May 28th, 2006, 2:07 pm

Well it's not your story, you took it from fable. Lol.

And uh it's short.

Rapidash · **Posted:** May 28th, 2006, 2:46 pm

CreepyPirate wrote:

Well it's not your story, you took it from fable. Lol.

And uh it's short.

(h).

Make it bi.

Meaning evil and good. Not..you know, bi..

Kronic · **Posted:** May 28th, 2006, 8:29 pm

Yeah...plagarism is cool :-s

Btw you posted this 'story' of yours in RS Related Media too. :lol:

Devin · **Posted:** May 29th, 2006, 5:31 am

so you are how old *not an actual question but just being sarcastic*

oh and i think avatar would love it if you broke the game disk in half...

have a nice day!

Alex 43 · **Posted:** May 29th, 2006, 7:21 am

Time to summarize:

Guy is living a good life.
Guy's sister is having a birthday.
Guy wants to buy a present.
Guy is a newbie.
Guy begs for money from his father.
Guy's father says only if he hears good things about him.
Guy quarells over whether or not to be good or evil.

... yeah, name speaks for itself. It's an advertisement instead of a story.

Adbot · **Posted:** May 29th, 2006, 7:21 am

MattVortex · **Posted:** May 29th, 2006, 8:07 am

Firstly, any piece of writing shorter than 500 words doesnt warrant being called a story. Thats 83 words long.

Secondly, plagiarists suck. Write your own story.

Thirdly, make this "Avatar" good, but make him have an inner core of angst and depression so he ends up slitting his own throat. That will ruin your so-called "story".