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 Post subject: Lyrics & Vocals
PostPosted: January 30th, 2009, 11:19 am 
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I'm not here to force a rewind,
I know I can't change your mind,
but I heard you were lost, and you I just want to find.
I'm not here to emphasize the underlined,
I can't read your mind,
baby come back because you're one of a kind.

http://members.cox.net/playasoccer_7/One%20of%20a%20Kind.wav

Please rate them separate.
For example if you like the lyrics and dislike my voice or if you dislike the lyrics and like my voice, just keep them separate.
Also let me know if you think I should go slower or faster, makes changes to lyrics etc etc etc

Thanks for you're constructive criticism


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PostPosted: January 30th, 2009, 11:19 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Lyrics & Vocals
PostPosted: January 30th, 2009, 2:33 pm 
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I think that when it gets to "I'm not here to emphasize the underlined" it should be sped up slightly, other than that it sounds pretty good.

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