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Blossomed Flower
Chapter One First Day
Buzz buzz a hand comes up and turns off the alarm clock. “Brother wake up you’ll be late for school.” Kodia rolls over and gets up.
“Man summer already over! Hey Sara its 6am why did you get me up so early? Kodia puts his face into the pillow and looks up.
Sara trying to make a cute face. I have break feast and I wanted you to eat it. Kodia gets up and yawns.
“Ok Sara let me get dressed and I’ll be right out deal?” Kodia grabs his school uniform. “Oh yea Sara make me some coffee please.”
“Sure meet you down stars’ Sara runs down the stars and gets Kodia’s coffee ready.
“Ok I’m here what’s for break feast Sara” He looks down and notices eggs, ham, and black coffee. “Wow this looks good thanks for the food!” Kodia eats beside Sara.
“Brother our home room and teacher sheet’s came in today lets see who we have.” Sara hands Kodia the sheet.
“Well I have room 546b with Miss. Sparks. Kodia looks into Sara’s gleaming eyes. “What’s wrong Sara?”
“We have the same room and guess who else there is.” Sara points out on the sheet.
“What we have Sakura, Nolan, Britney, and Moe! Kodia falls back. “I was hoping for a peaceful year.”
“What do you mean Kodia!?” Smacks Kodia over the head.
“Nothing but I have something for you if you come outside.” Kodia grabs his back and goes outside with Sara following closely behind. Kodia puts hit hand in his pocket and pulls out a blue jewelry box.
Sara grabs it and opens it. “Wow Kodia its cute why did you get this for me? Sara puts the necklace with a bell on.
“You know what day it is this is the day when we became family.” Kodia hugs Sara.
“Kodia your so sweat you’re the best thing that ever happened to me.” Sara raps her arms around Kodia..
“What are you guys doing?” A girl walks up to them.
“Sakura!” Kodia and Sara Blushes red.
“Yup its me I just came back from Japan.”
“You two better to get moving if we want to make it to school on time.” Sara grabs Kodia’s hand and starts running.
“Look its Moe she came back already.” Sara waves. “ Hay Moe its been a long time.
“Sara!” Moe runs over and hugs her tightly.
“So Moe how was France?” Kodia asks Moe.
“It was awesome I brought souvenirs for you guys.” Moe pulls out key changes and gives one to every one.
“Thank you Moe.” Sara puts it on the keys.
“Well were at school guys see you all.” Sakura runs to her part of the school.
“Man did Moe’s breast get bigger?” Kodia gets hit in the head with a hard punch.
“Kodia you pervert!” Sara grabs her fist.
“Sara I did not know you were there honestly.” Kodia gets up/
Kodia and Sara walk into class. “Yo Kodia and Sara.” Nolan and Britney waves.
“Hey Nolan and Britney how was your summer?” Kodia ask,
“Nothing much we just camped and played games”. Britney says while punching Nolan lightly in the arm.
“Everyone sit down I’ll be your teacher Miss. Sparks.” She sits down. “I want everyone to right a report about there summer and hand It in at 12pm.”
Later during the report. “Hey Kodia wake up.” Jabs him with a pin.
“Kodia turns around. “Shut up and let me sleep I’m tired. Kodia gets taped on. “You *** hole let me sleep.
Miss. Sparks holding a ruler stands there with a grin. “Go to the office!”
Kodia gets up and heads to the office..
After school that day everyone meets up with Kodia.
“So how was the office?” Nolan laughing.
“It was your fault Nolan.” Kodia speeds up.
“Well everyone want to have tea at our house so we can catch up with each other.” Sara asks everyone.
“Sure I’ll come have some tea.” Britney answers.
“Me to ill have some.” Puts his arm around Britney.
“How about you Moe and Sakura is already at our house.”
“ Sorry guys but I have work probably some other time.” Moe bows. “I’m sorry and she runs off.
“Well lets get to our house.” Kodia starts walking.
Kodia, Sara, and everyone else gets to Kodia and Sara’s house.
“Ill get the tea.” Kodia walks into the kitchen and grabs the tea pot.
“So lets start about our summer.” Sakura asks while Kodia brings in the tea.
Everyone finishes up and leaves. “Man that was tiring.” Kodia heads to bed.
“Can I sleep with you Koida?” Sara follows him.
“Well today is special why not hop in.” Sara hops into Kodia’s be while Kodia turns off the light.
Sara looks over at Kodia’s sleeping face and tries to kiss him but he rolls over. “I want to kiss him.” Then Sara falls asleep.

Are you writing a play?

You need less dialogue.

Read some classic novels, take some advice on writing literature.

Frankly, I hate it. If you want advice, ask me.