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PostPosted: September 8th, 2005, 9:43 am 
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Yup,I'm posting my story!I havn't thought of a name for it yet cuz I suck at titles so any suggestions would be welcome.Sorry about no paragraphs...but I hate paragraphs. :P

Oh yeah,I was halfway through chapter 2 bafore I realized how much of a hero I was making myself,but by then I figured it was to late to change me. :D



PROLUGUE

Anna pushed a strand of her brown hair out of her face as she paused from her writing.It was amazing how long it took to write three letters that were almost exactly the same.In these letters she was asking Josh,Jason and Shelby to to come meet her at Camlot so she could share some very important but un-specifiable information with them.Strangely,they were the hardest letters she had ever had to write,even though they should ave been Annas easiest.Sge finished her musings and hunched over slightly as she continued her writing.Next moring she was finally done.She quickly ran over to Mack,Camlots mailman.
"Mack,deliver these letters to the people i wrote as soon as you possably can.These are very confidential so don't let anyone read them,okay?Anna said,pressing the letters into his hands.
"Sure sweatheart!I'll do it just for you,baby!"Mack said.Anna sniffed in disgust.
"Mack,if i've told you once i've told you a thousand times,i'm NOT YOUR GIRLFREIND!!!Jus t deliver the letters,okay?"She said.The lad just grinned as he teleported away.Now to get ready for her freinds to arrive.Three days later Josh,Jason and Shelby were due to be there at Camelot.Anna put on her barrows (to further emphasize the point she was about to make)and trudged clumsily over to the four stones by Camlot castle.Everyone was there."Guys!it's so great to see you agian!"Anna breathed.So many hugs and laughter and blah blah blah."Cmon,"said Anna"I got us a private table at the pub.We'll talk more there."There was a chorus of okays so the group set off.
"So Anna...tell me.What's with the-nice-armor?I-and i'm guessing everyone else-thought it would be more casual then this."Shelby asked.Anna turned and noticed everyone else was wearing decorative robes and such.Oh well,no biggy.She answered slowly
"Well that 'un-specifiable' info stuff i worte you about...well it's even more important then i said...so you guys just might want to bank your phats."she added sarcasticly.Josh grinned toothlesly.
"you never were one to care for riches,were you?"Anna was still forming her retort when Jason cut in.
"Fun and games later."he said"were at the pub now so whats this big scary and important stuff?""Wait until we have our drinks first."Anna said then frowned."we'll need them."they got their drinks and sat down."okay tell us NOW?"asked Jason."Yeah,now."Anna took a sip of her cup and started."About one week ago,i was training on Karamja when I saw a hooded dude in Elvargs cage.He dropped something and left through the tunnel.Thinking i'd return whatever it was he dropped to him,I went over there to pick it up."Anna sighed as she produced a dirty sheet of paper out of seemingly nowhere."I found this"Everyone leaned forward as she slowly unrolled the paper.It read:

send 1 million kbds.

~zamorak :roll: :lol:


"I never new such few words could mean so much!"Gasped Shelby.
"Are you refering to me or the paper?No-don't answer that."Anna said dryly.
"But-what does this mean?"Josh asked cradling his cup in his hands."I mean,we do...what?"
"We go tell Saradomin!""Don't you think that's a bit much for four people?Couldn't we tell a knight or duke or something?"
"Do you really think they'd beleive us?"Jason asked."Ummm nooo...I guess not...to be honest...ummm."Josh stuttered.
"So the plan is we give this to Saradomin?-eventualy?"Asnked Shelby.Anna looked at each induvidual in turn before she answered"Yes we are!"she anounced briskly."Buuut sit back down-yes you too,Jason-let's make sure we all know what to do,mmm?Good.Okay,Jason and Josh you guys uh,do whatever you need to do to prepare for possable heavy comabt-get runes and arrows or whatever.Shelby,you've got the biggest job by far.Could you make food and potions for all of us?thanks.You guys can go now while I get ready.Anna smiled lmost sadly as the others jogged away."I hope we live through this."she murmured.

Mack practiced his earnest -but-stupid smile in the mirror just in case he should need it today.There,it was perfect.He smiled agian,only this time he smiled evily.Time to go and eavsdrop on Anna & freinds conversation.Yes,Zammy had truely thought up a master plan this time.Telling him to drop a fake army receipt on the ground so the stupid mortals would find it,be killed,luring Sara and Guthix into Zammys awaiting trap was simply genius!He did wonder what Zammys plan was as far as HOW to kill the mortals and even Sara and Guthix.After all,he wouldn't settle for just plain kill now,would he?Oh well,time to eavsdrop now,not time to ponder. :roll:

*deep breath* Chapter one!


Anna took a deep breath.Today they would start out on their quest to find Sara.How exciting!Rumor had it that Sara was last seen in Lumbridge so that's where they were going.Personally,she had some doubts about that but they needed to start somewhere.Here came the others.
"Are we ready to go now?"Asked Anna
"No no,wait,I didn't give you your stuff yet."gasped Shelby.She must have been up all night making the supplies,poor darling!They got their stuff and she teleported.Well here we are,Lumbridge!"Where's Shelby?"She asked the guys as they appeared beside her.
"Oh she can't teleport with runes,remember?She used her ring and tellyed to the dual arena."answered Jason.They stood in silence for a few minutes...aha!here shelby came!
"Okay,so we start by splitting up and asking questions,right?"asked Josh."Yup!"Answered Anna.They meet up agian half an hour later only to find that none of them had found any useful information.How discouraging!
"So where do we go now?We've searched all of Lumbridge."asked Shelby with a sigh."well we could...uh...hmm..."Anna murmured.they could do...something...Josh snapped his fingers.
"The wise old man!" he exclaimed.They all ran to Draynor,stopping abruptly at the door of the wise old mans shack."who goes in?"asked Anna.Josh gave her a gentle push.
"you go in,your the leader."he said.Anna nodded.The musty smell of old books filled her nose as she went inside the house and shut the door behind her.
"Well hello there young lady!"a voice called out"how can I help you?"Anna squinted through the semi-dark room.Oh there he was.She walked up to him
"Yes,I'm Anna."she said."And I was wondering if-if-uh-nice blue...party hat...""Oh not your not another one of THEM are you?"the old man cut in irritably."I was so hoping for some nice conversation.""Oh no....no i'm not 'another one' I just-uhhh-I just wanted some information from-from you-please?"Anna stammered"Oh well then!tell me it is that you want then!""Well um,let's just say i need to find Sara quickly.""Saradomin rarely shows himself to mortals.""Yes i know but this is an extremely special case.""Well then for some gp...""How much?!?""10,000.""Aargh!here!!!"Thank you very much.Now let me think..."The old man rubbed hid temples as if he had a headache.10k most likely for nothing..."Ah!Now I remember!"the old man said happily."Well?!?Where is he?!?"Anna asked,her excitment obviously rising."Well,"the old man began.""If you go to the lost city and say a spell you will be teleported to either Zamoracks,Saradomins,or guthixs location."That was almost helpful."What's the spell???"The old man told her.:Remember though,you might not be teleported to Saradomin,you could be teleported to Zammy or Guthix."He warned.Anna grimaced.Risks,risks...
"I know.And thank you."She ran outside screaming."GUYS!GUYS!He knew!"

newest part!!!Chapter 2!

So there they were in the famous Lost City.
"What should we do if the Old Man was wrong?"Shelby asked nervously.
"Duh,start looking somewhere else."answered Jason"I ment if we got teleported somewhere else or got blown to bits or something."Shelby snapped"If we get blown to bits?Thanks for making me think about that."Jason snapped back.Anna calmly seperated the two
"Calm down guys,were just wasting time."she said then grabbed Josh's waiting hand and took Shelbys too.Jason sighed and took Shelbys other hand.
"On the count of three we all yell it,right?" he asked.Anna nodded,then counted down and they all screamed out the spell.The sparkling lost city vanished as a circle of purple So she and the others were now in....he middle of nowhere?!?Suddenly,in a flash of light a Zammy mage appeared and looked straight at Shelby.
"No!" Anna cried,trying desperately to cover Shelby with her sheild.Shelby gave anna a terrified smile and managed to croak out a "thanks" as she crouched low beneath the sheild.Meanwhile Jason and Josh were in full attack.The mage threw a slugger in Josh's direction,but it didn't do anything to his dragon hide.The mage threw one at Jason,do some damage but Jason just quickly gobbled down some food. :) Then the two young men started throwing their own stuff in the zammy mages direction,doing some big time boo-boos on him. :wink: Back and forth it went for what seemed like hours until the mage abruptly stopped his attack on the guys and threw a single firey ball at the girls!Anna tried to run but she couldn't seem to move her legs.All she could do was stand there,sheild over the screaming Shelby and scream too.The fire-like-ball was coming closer...closer.She blacked out.

oh nos!are they dead????staaaaay tuned!

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heh, gj. One thing, although you hate paragraphs ( I DO TOO!) an easy way to make this more readable is to simply press enter whenever someone new talks. I mean, make it a new line when some1 new talks. It breaks it down a bit and makes it look less intimidating... :lol:

Anyway, im so proud! according to your post on my thread, I INSPIRED THIS! heh. Im so special :wink:

Anyway, good job! A few typos that should be corrected here and there, but otherwise, great job! :D

8.5 out of 10. (IF you want a rating. :wink: )

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yay! another story!
ill be looking forward to reading this
btw gamefreak the beast 0wn4n3d :P

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gamefreak318 wrote:
heh, gj. One thing, although you hate paragraphs ( I DO TOO!) an easy way to make this more readable is to simply press enter whenever someone new talks. I mean, make it a new line when some1 new talks. It breaks it down a bit and makes it look less intimidating... :lol: *sighs*i guess so.i'll add them now i guess lol :roll:

Anyway, im so proud! according to your post on my thread, I INSPIRED THIS! heh. Im so special :wink: why yes you are.:P

Anyway, good job! A few typos that should be corrected here and there, but otherwise, great job! :D i was half blind though,remember.:)

8.5 out of 10. (IF you want a rating. :wink: )why thank you!

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PS-Do you like my new addition to The Beast? :Di was expeting you to post it lol.i check it out.


and a thanks to you too imahobbit :)

oh yeah,your gonna love my super monster.
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