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 Post subject: The beginning...
PostPosted: March 2nd, 2005, 5:29 pm 
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I've already sent this to reldo@jagex.com btw but I thought i'd put it here to see what you think.
I've written it as if it came from varrock library:

The beginning of Runescape

The mother goddess Gielenor became pregnant ,noone knows why,
And gave birth to 3 Children Saradomin,Guthix and Zamorak.
They grew to strong gods and their attitudes were beginning to show,Saradomin liked peace and music but Zamorak liked blood and Destruction,however Guthix worried about his brothers greatly as they were beggining to hate each other so he decided he would try to keep the peace by showing both that they were both in a way right.
Guthix decided to make a gift for his brothers and he moulded a huge plane of land and named it Gielenor after their mother. He then went on to make small groups of human settlers their tribal names were,Hemenster,Yanille,Aradougne,Varrock,Canfis,Lumbridge,Al Kharid,Draynor, Mort'ton,Falador,Brimhaven and Karamja.

Both Zamorak and Saradomin Smiled upon this new plane.
Zamorak's eye Turned to Canfis and he made the citizens into werewolves
However Saradomin Turned many of the tribes to huge honourable citys and Smiled upon them with the warmth of his enlightment

Guthix sure that his work would keep the two friendly fell into a long slumber.

However Soon Saradomin Turned his eye to canfis and saw that the werewolves were attempting to break into varrock and turn every man woman and child there into a werewolf!
Saradomin furious pitched Zamorak to a battle over the Towns of Kellenor Draconis and Putradan.
The two sent in their armys against each other and laid the whole area to waste,this land that would in future be known as The Wilderness.
Both armys had been destroyed and Saradomin and Canfis prepared to do battle against each other.
Gielenor the mother goddess took her life in sadness at wat had had become of her children .
Then Guthix woke up, he saw thhat his brothers were about tyo battle to the death and jumped between them.
Both brothers stopped dead at the sight of guthix,they had not seen him for many a year.
"Brothers," said guthix "Do you realise what has become of you?
What has become of this plane of land on which you live? Do you not realise what has happened to our mother?"
Saradomin and Zamorak dropped their swords and wept for they realised that their Action and hate had led to the death of Gielenor.
Guthix made the gods swear on Gielenors grave that they would never do combat on this plane again.
They decided to rename gielenor RuneScape as the mention of gielenor brought great sorrow to them.

But their trouble was not over yet.A Malicious Spirit known only as Zaros entered the realm of Runescape.
This was the one time when Zamorak and Saradomin came together to fight this malicious spirit even eviller than zamorak .How he was bound is not known as The Gods of Runescape fear to tell us in case terror grips our hearts and we all go insane...

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PostPosted: March 2nd, 2005, 5:29 pm 
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it's stupid.. i rather read the real story, and how andrew created than reading a fiction story..


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Rocket2004 wrote:
it's stupid.. i rather read the real story, and how andrew created than reading a fiction story..

Yup..And how andrew had the whole great idea..
It's kind of wasting reading that..Little bit of boring to me..

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I rate 5/10 not the best story, but it's ok.

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maybe revise it and make it better or just start from the beggining and make a totally different story...


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I fell asleep after the first paragraph. :shock:


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