The Story - 2ND CHAPTER RELEASED .:: MUST SEE ::.x

King Kulla · **Posted:** February 3rd, 2005, 9:55 pm

Dan wrote:

Um ok... but you graded your own thing? lol

A-

thats the average of people that graded it

sweet story hero! :lol:

oops srry about double post, had lots of lag

Adbot · **Posted:** February 3rd, 2005, 9:55 pm

Hero · **Posted:** February 4th, 2005, 2:30 pm

Thanks!

Rocket2004 · **Posted:** February 4th, 2005, 7:55 pm

awsome, but why write something that never going to happen and never happend( i hate fictions, that's why i stand negative against this resolution), i'd rather hear personal experiences

A- for the effort
B+ for the grammar and spelling
C- for the idea

Hero · **Posted:** February 4th, 2005, 10:19 pm

But with imagination it opens up a wonderful world.

calcium878 · **Posted:** February 5th, 2005, 2:21 am

Rocket2004 wrote:

awsome, but why write something that never going to happen and never happend( i hate fictions, that's why i stand negative against this resolution), i'd rather hear personal experiences

yep, if you, or anyone else, could write a dramatic, epic story on a wildy experience or quest experience in rs.....that would be cool!

Hero · **Posted:** February 5th, 2005, 7:57 am

oooh Yeah i think ill do that thanks calcium

Adbot · **Posted:** February 5th, 2005, 7:57 am

calcium878 · **Posted:** February 5th, 2005, 10:54 am

Hero wrote:

oooh Yeah i think ill do that thanks calcium

np...we wait to hear your mind's epic wonders!!!

Rocket2004 · **Posted:** February 5th, 2005, 12:40 pm

Hero wrote:

oooh Yeah i think ill do that thanks calcium

Lol, shouldn't u thank me??

Anyways, you can write experience about u when u were a noob

that might be a good story, or how you fell in love with someone

pika69 · **Posted:** February 5th, 2005, 1:07 pm

I suggest you re-write both parts.

sith lord76 · **Posted:** February 6th, 2005, 7:20 am

pika69 wrote:

I suggest you re-write both parts.

yes, both parts could b beta, especially the second chapter, it was a little hard 2 folo. but good luck on ur storys and we cant w8 4 chapta 3 lol!!!! :!: