tosca

Humus · **Posted:** December 12th, 2009, 11:55 am

ehh.. haven't opened up PS in whats seemed like years.. so I was a little rusty, but I had so much fun making it:

don't ask about the name XD

black and white (with a little added contrast):

oh and thanks Ryannub for critiquing before I posted <3

Adbot · **Posted:** December 12th, 2009, 11:55 am

Al3X · **Posted:** December 12th, 2009, 12:06 pm

Color is definitely needed for this one. It looks nice but it isn't your best work. I think you covered the render up a bit too much. maybe you could try darkening the edges a bit and adding more light to the middle area.

And I won't ask about the name as much as i want to.

Humus · **Posted:** December 12th, 2009, 1:56 pm

Al3X wrote:

Color is definitely needed for this one. It looks nice but it isn't your best work. I think you covered the render up a bit too much. maybe you could try darkening the edges a bit and adding more light to the middle area.

And I won't ask about the name as much as i want to.

XD Okay well I was going to use a font called Tosca Zero but I decided to leave the text.. but I liked the word tosca. Yeah I only made a b/w version cause a tip.it guy wanted to see.. thought I'd put it up there anyway. No not my best work I agree.. and yeah after i'd finished I could see that i'd covered over the render quite alot. I did try erasing some but obviously not enough. Thanks for the C&C.

Al3X · **Posted:** December 12th, 2009, 4:35 pm

Humus wrote:

Al3X wrote:

Color is definitely needed for this one. It looks nice but it isn't your best work. I think you covered the render up a bit too much. maybe you could try darkening the edges a bit and adding more light to the middle area.

And I won't ask about the name as much as i want to.

XD Okay well I was going to use a font called Tosca Zero but I decided to leave the text.. but I liked the word tosca. Yeah I only made a b/w version cause a tip.it guy wanted to see.. thought I'd put it up there anyway. No not my best work I agree.. and yeah after i'd finished I could see that i'd covered over the render quite alot. I did try erasing some but obviously not enough. Thanks for the C&C.

I try

I'm a bit stuck on a sig currently and yours helped get me moving with some ideas

Ryan · **Posted:** December 13th, 2009, 6:26 am

Humus wrote:

oh and thanks Ryannub for critiquing before I posted <3

<3

I think the black and white version takes too much of the life away from the sig, and basically makes it look very bland.

Stick to colours pl0x

Killjoy · **Posted:** December 18th, 2009, 10:58 pm

Agreed. I think the colors are what make this sig.

I actully like this signature alot.
The combinations of colors work very well with the signaute.

I find it hard to see what the original render was though.
Mind posting a link to it?
I think that fact might take away from the signature a bit also.

8/10

Adbot · **Posted:** December 18th, 2009, 10:58 pm

Tim · **Posted:** December 30th, 2009, 2:36 pm

With all that you have there, the black and white sig takes away from it. Color all the way with this one, good job Humus.