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 Post subject: WIP - Critique needed. [updated; now 3rd draft]
PostPosted: February 24th, 2009, 12:44 pm 
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I'm working on a new scene, and I'm looking for any comments in order to help me as I progress with it. Obviously, I'm not done myself - but I would like your input.
Latest WIP renders are at the top

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Critque and Comments are very much appreciated, thanks.

Oh, and the symbol's there - who can see it? :D

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 Post subject: Re: WIP - Critique needed.
PostPosted: February 24th, 2009, 2:32 pm 
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I have done 3D for a long time and I would love to learn how you make your scenes :D A tutorial would be awesome :D

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It reminds me of the blood altar, which is (in my mind) the coolest looking place on RuneScape.

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 Post subject: Re: WIP - Critique needed.
PostPosted: February 24th, 2009, 5:18 pm 
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Reminds me of a Control Room from Halo ;)

I am liking these scenes, you are doing great work, Anubis.

I looked carefully, and I see no flaws.

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 Post subject: Re: WIP - Critique needed. [updated]
PostPosted: February 24th, 2009, 11:19 pm 
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I have updated my scene and will hopefully be finishing in the next update or two.

Thanks for the Comments so far guys ^_^

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 Post subject: Re: WIP - Critique needed. [updated; now 3rd draft]
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yey for me seeing the logo. Love it, keep them coming.

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 Post subject: Re: WIP - Critique needed. [updated; now 3rd draft]
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Looks very good at the moment and I just love the patterns on the floor around the altar(?) bit in the middle. The lighting for the whole image is superb and nothing really to improve in that area. Just a couple of small corrections that'll make it look better:
on the walkway bit, on either side there are two bits of light, like small-ish window size, idk, if its meant to be there thats fine, just saw it,
on the huge spike things there are a couple of lighting issues where there are jagged-y lines going upwards

those are just a couple of things I could see, don't take offence though, I really love this. And i've had a go at 3d before and its pretty complex stuff so good work on even getting started with 3d and not giving up like I did :B
It'd be nice to see more effects on and in the immediate area of the circle bit in the middle, maybe flames or something? I know its just a WIP at the moment, but those are just some things that I'd add. :P


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