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Author: | Veggie Eater [ September 28th, 2008, 10:24 am ] |
Post subject: | My art / I need help. |
Alright So I'm a perfectionist when it comes to art. I have been working on this picture of my dog, Lennon, and I'm halfway through it, but I'm getting extremely frustrated with it. I can't seem to make it right >_< Here are two pictures I did that I love: ![]() I drew this in my art class, they're eggs. Two of them are large whole eggs, the other two are regular sized broken eggs. I drew it using charcoal. ![]() This is a drawing I made of my friend. =] I used pencil. Now, this is the scary part. I want constructive criticism please. Like I said, I'm only half way done, and I'm feeling kind of stuck. ![]() This is helping already. I can see that his eyes are messed up, and that white spot on the right side of his nose is too bright/big. But yeah, I just want to make this drawing as good as the other two. |
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Author: | Kyle [ September 28th, 2008, 10:34 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: My art / I need help. |
Your dog is really good is really good. Im assuming that is his tail? Im not an artist so i dont really want to tell you how to draw but id make the tail more of a point or something. |
Author: | Mikhail [ September 28th, 2008, 10:56 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: My art / I need help. |
Wow I love these, Anyway the picture of your dog I would make the nose a bit more darker, as well as the tail make it more darker and kinda pointy at the end, flawless that's for sure. |
Author: | rs josec78 [ September 28th, 2008, 2:25 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: My art / I need help. |
me too not really and artist and they both look awsome ![]() |
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