I really want advance critique on this. Post any suggestions because any suggestion could help for improvements.
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| Author: | Jaden [ March 31st, 2007, 2:02 pm ] |
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I really want advance critique on this. Post any suggestions because any suggestion could help for improvements. |
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| Author: | Mushroom Queen [ March 31st, 2007, 2:24 pm ] |
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I like this, but use the Liquify tool in PS to make her right eye the same size as her left eye. I would also recommend using a brush for her hair. If you use a hair strand brush, you could add some really good detail to her hair. Hm, the text. It's a little hard to notice since it's all too light. Try to maybe add a dark-ish stroke around the text and lower the opacity of the outer glow to even things out. Other than that, this is a major improvement from the trophies you posted. The colours are good. I like the underwater look. Maybe you could use a bubble brush to add some bubbles and stuff. Hm, there's still lots you can do with this. I like it though. |
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| Author: | Mikau Nero [ March 31st, 2007, 3:07 pm ] |
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The girl's face just plain scares me. In some areas, thee lighting of the sig doesn't really match that of the girl, and I don't really like how the hair is cut. |
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