My first pixel Wip?

red eyes 16 · **Posted:** June 28th, 2007, 10:51 pm

This is it in its progress heres the forms of it i've made of course i only saved diffrent ones when i was testing things but here they are with captions work is still in progress

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Shot at 2007-06-28
"^Possibly the earliest save i have of its progress^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^this is the first test of the rune defender you also notice, I've added another arm and the skirt and the moon is shaded and diffrent, Plus if you look closely theres grey blobs around the moon and ahrims?^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^Another try at the rune defender^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^ANOTHER try at rune defender^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^The final try then i do one more and i think i may have a copy of it, ps the grey blobs still there^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^for some reason i watermarked this one.. This one has the finished rune defender and some more shading thats hidden, PS i also fixed the grey blobs^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^The second watermarked cause i was sharing it on my site and didn't want no leechers, This has alot of stuff on it now, It has a whip that he pked and a dds he pked, And the mage skill capes more visible and darker and he has health over his head and alots shaded^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^This is where i start the rune scene. Now the scenes pulling together notice the new rune pick drop and the rune rock, Obviously he was pking at rune rocks. Also more shading and a few other things^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^This is the finished rune rock one i believe and its also watermarked.. And alot more stuffs around the general area^"

Shot at 2007-06-28

"^The latest version of the entire picture this is the eh 67% version ALOT more shading and a few more things added to fix up the graphics^"

Thats just the basics of what i've done this was all made in ms paint, But i know this is my FIRST ever pixel.. so its not much but i made it all in ms paint so ehh.. There i will be updating this have fun!
"^^"

BETA: Beta of the new ahrims "What needs to be added before hes in the scene: Details, Them little grey globs thats on the ahrims, And his body needs a bit more editing..

soooo ehhh here critize it i know you want too and once again this is not finished this is a 30 % done version

Shot at 2007-06-29

Heres the new ahrims shaded a bit more

Shot at 2007-06-30

Bottom skirt and the robe shirt is shaded awaiting full shading and details

Adbot · **Posted:** June 28th, 2007, 10:51 pm

Kyle · **Posted:** June 28th, 2007, 11:15 pm

erm, welll....hey its a first. Add some shading and it would look better.

Connor · **Posted:** June 28th, 2007, 11:18 pm

Omg you are one of the greatest pixel artists I've seen!!! Please make more when you finish! PS what is that box on the right?

Tjbartz2009 · **Posted:** June 28th, 2007, 11:48 pm

I hate to sound harsh but...

Its horrible, the body is out of total proportions and it doesnt look anything like an RS Character or a human for that matter. The shading is actually nicely done. But the whole thing itself doesnt look good...nice try though. Keep practicing

red eyes 16 · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 12:00 am

Thanks, critics are your friends, And i know, As i said most of the rest of the job is shading, And dude that said his bodys out of preortions thats the stick image, I'm making him look real, But i cant find a base image, Like to know what i should base him off of, anyone know any ahrim pixels?.

The Haysta · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 12:14 am

Are you on the moon or something, or is RS's moon yellow?

I thought the runerock was a suit of armour at first, I think that says enough really, take advice from TJ since I'm not the sort of person you want to ask it from.

10 minutes in paint ^^^ ...yeah.

Adbot · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 12:14 am

zvono · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 12:57 am

Nice job.
Really good shading but it looks bad.
Next time it will be much better.
Whats a Wip?

Alex · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 2:14 am

Ok, right

Don't know what else to say that no one else hasn't said.

The shading is good but it's wrong. The rune defender's point is shaded in one direction but the hilt is shaded in a different direction.

The way a shades direction depends on where the source of light is coming from.

Take the earth for example. You can see it's darker on the right.

This is because the source of light (the Sun) is to the left of the Earth .

Hoped that helped you

Burnt Joint · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 2:28 am

YAY!!! you can see Australia@@@@

Shot at 2007-06-29

Dont ask me why I'm so exited :oops:

O.T---> I'm going to have to agree with everyone else here. It's definitely not the greatest pixel work I have seen, but I'm sure with a bit of practice, and a will to keep trying, you will do great in years,months, or even weeks to come.

red eyes 16 · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 2:56 am

Yeah, I figured ahrims may want to take a bite out of the moon i hear its swiss cheeze. Or however you spell it. And most of these things on here are like placed there until the real versions finished like ahrims im nearly through with the full on of him now give it ehhhh a day and i'll have him ready to be added.. And yes the moon i can edit that. And the fact of the lightsource really helped cause.. I mean lol with bigger objects like ahrims which im in shading progress atm its too big to even shade you'd have to start over if your doing basic drag down a bit and draw some drag down a bit and draw some. Thats how i do it.. And the little thing i drag isn't big enough so it limits what i can shade. So help if you can with that. But heh heh most people wouldn't like being hated on for your work, Or whatever you want to call it. But im glad when i see it cause i know what to do to fix it. i'm quiting all im doing atm and updating the moon i forgot it was grey ROFL im sorry i just kept thinking yellow i know it sounds retarted, I've just been around too much paint today.. Oh well whatever in the next version expect another moon :d

EDIT:

BETA: Beta of the new ahrims "What needs to be added before hes in the scene: Details, Them little grey globs thats on the ahrims, And his body needs a bit more editing..

soooo ehhh here critize it i know you want too and once again this is not finished this is a 30 % done version

Shot at 2007-06-29

Heres a matchup i tried to do between both versions, The old versions a tad scratchy due to my quick copy and paste techniques..

Shot at 2007-06-29[/table]

Sebastian · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 3:32 am

Well, the new looks better, but there's still a long way to how it really looks on RuneScape and how it would look if it were real life.
But you have improved by alot since that first one.

Jaden · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 10:38 am

I don't know. I guess it's pretty good. Probably better than I can do, which is why I stay away from pixel art. Good effort, though and keep practising.

red eyes 16 · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 12:30 pm

Yes, i plan on fixing him up i see body issues with the newer version im working on him AS we speak. Its hard to do a mass body shading like that.. Atleast for me. But i like a challenge so there we go.

Tjbartz2009 · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 12:56 pm

That's looking a lot better, keep more progress coming

Btw whoever asked what "WIP" means.

Work
In
Progress

red eyes 16 · **Posted:** June 29th, 2007, 4:08 pm

Yes, I meant to reply with what wip meant, To tell you the truth i was wondering what wip meant when i put it in the title and later i was thinking.. Wip.. hmm WORK IN PROGRESS!! lol. But i think i know how to shade his fat a..