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| Author: | Lord Zamorak [ July 13th, 2007, 7:19 pm ] |
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The first one has a few problems. Like a u on the persons clothes, a red dot floating in no where, and a white dot. Now for the fakes. Top fake: Luck is kind of messed up, like you said. And it's in all capitals, but everything else isn't. The clothing could use more details than just a few red lines. But the picture of your character and the clothing match up. Bottom fake: The crosses could use some more details. The teeth don't look very Runescapeish. Also, there are a few pixels at the bottom right of the equip screen. The "Rarity" is perfect, though. On both: I like how the weight changes from when you have a sword and when you don't. Most people would overlook that. It's not overdone (a good thing), but both have a few floating objects in them that shouldn't be there. Overall: 3.5/5 |
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| Author: | Adbot [ July 13th, 2007, 7:19 pm ] |
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| Author: | Southrend [ July 13th, 2007, 9:58 pm ] |
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Yeah you can improve these two fakes if you could add a little shade. Especially for the bottom one shade would be a good addition. Also you should try to paint the crosses on to the cloth. It looks like it's sort of floating right before it. Rotate it a little, make the top a bit smaller than the bottom of the cross. Add some depth in it. If you could add those it will start looking pretty good. |
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| Author: | Life Ruiner [ July 14th, 2007, 10:19 pm ] |
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The Crosses need to be angled |
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| Author: | bobert814 [ July 20th, 2007, 2:57 pm ] |
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First pic: - the red is too consistent... you need to follow the shading. - the sword looks like excalibur colored in. with a crayon. - as mentioned before, there is a random red dot and a floating 'u.' - the LUck looks handwritten. Second pic: - the crosses have no shading. - there should be no black outline around the teeth... usually nothign on the character is outlined in black. - there are random lines again near the bottom right. - the Rarity is meh. there is a random line after the second 'r.' The 't' is a few pixels too low. The 'y' has the hook chopped off. |
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| Author: | Braaron [ July 24th, 2007, 6:01 pm ] |
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Great job, letters are really blotchy, but everything else is good. And the robe designs aren't convincing. |
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